Oh, the intrigue! xDD Better write fast, or I'll die with suspense! And then come back as a ghost to read the next chapter.

sure, Raze is a bully... but idk I can see him and Calvin... together. Although, maybe Raze is just being an ass and kissed him just to mess with him? hopefully not. By the way, I really like the name Calvin, there's this kid I know who's name is Calvin (he's cute) and he reminds of your character. :) good work, and keep up with the updating!

Just... pointing out that Kenzie is an idiot. An idiot with a good idea, but for what he wants... completely horrible idea. (Oh, I bet I can see where this is going too.. or where it's already gone. "only some" you say...hah. I don't think I would like this story any other way.)

I think, to fight fire with fire, Kenzie should just kick Raze's ass. _

Anyway, I really like how he just followed Calvin into the house without an invitation, and then it didn't even stop there. He followed him into the bathroom too. I can't imagine how completely arrogant and oblivious a person has to be to just walk in like that. I loved it. (I know other characters like that. They are the best kind.)

I think Calvin's right on this one. Raze won't stop and Kenzie can't watch him 24/7. I mean, I want them together, but I can't see this helping Calvin's problem with Raze.

e.o What is Raze's problem? You've mentioned that you are planning on getting all of your cliché out with this story, so if I try hard enough i could probably predict what his problem is... but still.. I hate him. I think you should... kill him. Or at least make him get suspended... what happened to discipline! I'm guessing his school doesn't have the same "No tolerance" policy as most schools I know have... (Or Raze and Corry would probably be expelled before Calvin could be beat up again...) Again, this isn't really complaining so much as it's me saying how much I dislike bullies.

On the other hand, Fame seems very... nice. It's good that he finally has some friends, but it's so shallow of her to only like him now that he's pretty. -.- People these days, they all annoy me... so don't worry about how I rant to you in reviews. I really do love the story, and it wouldn't be the same without the things that I complain about. (So, I'll stop complaining now... _)

Okay, someone needs to seruiously hurt aze. And who was holding Calvin? Was it Kenzie? That would be so mean!

Captivating story. Are you going to continue it please? lol

I love this story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love Calvin. I love Fame. I love you. You're so awesome. Keep going with this beast! ~

Ahh.. your story makes me laugh. Although I don't think this is supposed to be funny, my favorite part was, "His grin goes wider, and with a creepy little finger wave, he runs off." Because I imagined a creepy little finger wave.

I still feel sorry for Calvin. Not only did he get beaten so badly, but he then had to pay way too much to get his makeover. (And he looks like a girl. Or "a guy from one of those bands that makes mediocre music that twelve-year-old girls listen to." His new look made my day.)

I liked how this story starts, butr i agree with one of your other reviewers. He should not have forgiven MacKenzie so quickly. That was too much of a beating to take. It warranted a more powerful response.

That beig said, now I want to know what the Raze was doing at the car window.

I don't think he should forgive him that easily... I feel really pissed off at Kenzie. Still.

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Poor Calvin... At least he has that make-over idea to fix his life. (And make his heart attempt to flutter...)

But also, isn't the thing with people looking better without glasses used quite frequently? ...Not that I'm complaining... (I sort of was complaining, but that doesn't mean I like the story any less.)

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Jerks! they beat him up so bad! I feel so sorry for him.

Why do they have to pick on the nerdy ones?

I like this a lot and am hoping to read more of it :D

It's a good thing I was watching Phineas and Ferb or I would've cried for him. Haha.