|Reviews for The Kings Mistress|
| Just a Crazy Man chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
Love it. :)
| Just a Crazy Man chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
| stavy chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
more more more
| Corinna Tate chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Well, if no one else has the guts to write the first one, I'll do it! There is a lot going on this first chapter, and that's a good thing. But there is also a lot that is somewhat unclear like the last couple paragraphs; who's the vampire, and who's the soul mate, and if one is already claimed why would he want her by his side? I would recommend a beta to help with spelling, grammar, and some word choices.
On the bright side this story does invite the readers to come back and find out where it's leading. It's not a run of the mill historical fiction since the guards have guns not swords. And yet it's so patriarchal it feels like history. From your summary I can understand why the people love the queen; the king seems a little indifferent and maybe over-indulged. With a potential growing cast of characters there's so many places this story could go!