|Reviews for Apple Bottom Academy Edited|
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 18 . 8/13/2011
That last author's note was basically what I was going to say in my review.. so uhh.. this is awkward.. LOL
Brie/Aaron: MY HEART BE STILL! They are wonderfully adorable!
Kairi/Jason: KAIRI, CHOOSE A SIDE ALREADY OMG
Lily: Needs to be more mad about Vivian! Bro, I would've strangled her. -.-
Izzy: HUH? LOL That was so random and weird and awkward how she was put into the guys' class omg
Daphne: LMFAO SHE FAINTED HOW CLICHE
I can't wait for the next chapteeerrrrrr! WRITE MORE SOON! 3
| Sweet.Linda chapter 18 . 8/13/2011
Okay, let me try to get all my thoughts in order.
a.) AwWH! Brie and Aaron are adorable. x)
b.) Izzy's point of view. Heart, heart, heart. I loved how they were making fun of her when they woke up, and how she ended up in an all-boys class. Ha-larious. :')
c.) AWWH! Kairi and Jason are adorable, too!
d.) AND VIVIAN WAS REVEALED! DUNDUNDUN!
Amazing, as usual. :)
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 17 . 8/7/2011
Kairi was so badass! She was AWESOME in this chapter! I loved reading her. The whole Kairi/Jason scene killed me though. And the ending, with Gavin saying Brie left him... /3
LILY WAS SO AWESOME AWE YEAH NO ONE MESSES WITH THIS GIRLLLL
That Mia.. Nia? Is it Nia? LOL Whatever, her and Vivian.. those bitches need to be taken DOWN.
Andandandandand Brie HAS to meet Daph and the others D: Havetohavetohaveto!
OKAY WRITE MORE SOON BECAUSE THIS CHAPTER WAS ACTUALLY SO AWESOME LIKE MAAAAAAN
Okay happy writing 3
| Sweet.Linda chapter 17 . 8/6/2011
Gavin and Kairi are super duper ah-dorable. 333 But poor Jason. :(
Also, Vivian is so... evil. It's awesome! :')
Oh, and everyone else was adorable, too. Like, Izzy, and Aaron & Brie. And, woot! Daphne's all better. (H)
By the way... this chapter was, like, amazingly written. It sounded so... professional, I guess. :)
Keep up the amazing work ! x)
| Leafarrow chapter 5 . 8/6/2011
I'm leaving a review to tell you that I liked this chapter :P
I like how you've given the characters such distinct personalities, and I love the pixies :D
| Stef chapter 16 . 8/3/2011
Omg that chapte was so gooooood and :o did aaron give brie blood? Thats so coooool lol and epic but yeah this was amazing
| Sweet.Linda chapter 16 . 7/22/2011
OMGOSH! Poor Gavin! I really do hope Kairi can make him feel better again. But, I feel bad for Jason now, too. But... gaaah. They're both amazing!
And, YAY! Daphne's feeling better again! And Kairi's catching onto the twin thing! :)
This chapter was kind of confusing, but amazing nonetheless. Update soon, please! ;D
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 16 . 7/21/2011
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS:
| Sweet.Linda chapter 15 . 7/11/2011
KAT, I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING THAT PART WITH GAVIN & KAIRI. THAT TOTALLY MADE MY DAY. ;D
And, yaaay! They're FINALLY figuring out that they're twins. :)
Amazing chapter, as per usual. Keep it up. x)
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 15 . 7/10/2011
Lily's POV: LAWLS AWESOME
Izzy's POV: The fluff was cute! And the pep rally was so short! D:
Kairi's POV: WUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Gavin's POV: AGAIN! WUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Jason's POV: ONCE A AGAIN: WUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTT?
Happy writing :D
| stef chapter 15 . 7/10/2011
omggg izzy and seth kya kyaaaa kyaaaaa 33333333
also... since daph is a vampire... :S if shes not being given blood wouldn't she be.. hypothetically starving to death?
IZZY'S GOING TO BE IN SETHS CLASS HUR HUR HUR
| Sweet.Linda chapter 14 . 6/25/2011
"No! Brie, I said, do not eat that tree branch!"
LMAOLMAOLMAO. TOTALLY MADE MY DAY.
I loved Kairi and Izzy's point of views; they were hilarious. :')
And, vampire-Daph & -Brie are... epic. xD
This chapter was ah-flippen'mazing, as usual. :)
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 14 . 6/20/2011
Whoa long chapter was long but very very very very very very very awesome. I loveeddd it. Kairi was my favourite! xD
Write more soon! 3
| stef chapter 14 . 6/20/2011
HAHAH TAKE THAT LENA MBWAHHAHAHHAHAH
and LOLOLOLOL aiden LMFAO LMFAO.
DJFHSUDFH LILY WTF SHE ALMOST GOT RAPED WHUT OAO.
OMG KAIRI'S PARENTS 3 OMG BRIE omggg daphnee D: why doesn't he give a necklace to daphne tooo!
| xHopeless Romanticx chapter 13 . 6/8/2011
I love this story! The plot is very intriguing especially with Vivian and Brie. I like the romance among the mystery. I can't wait for more!