|Reviews for Apple Bottom Academy Edited|
| LittleMissAnonymous chapter 12 . 5/27/2011
I really like this story. I like the way you put a lot of detail into the world and you put attention into small things like slang and the like. My one problem with the story is well, not really, but I find it rather hard to follow the amount of characters you've put into the story. Don't take me wrong, it's an awesome story, but I've always had this problem with reading stories with too many characters. Maybe you could explain some more in an AN?
| too-lazy-to-sign-in ria chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
So many cliffies AGAIN. You and your cliffies! I loved Izzy's POV, it was hilarious. Everything else was so serious and dramatic. D: But a good kind. xD
Write more, for me? (:
| Stef chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
Uhh. Why was kairi in the gym in her pov when the lockdown started but in the dorm in lily's pov? Ahh i'll write a longer review after. Cuz im on my ipod now and my head hurts so much
| Sweet.Linda chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Okay, my reviews are always cut short. This is actually what I meant to say: The chapter title and your "This is a very lovable, fluffy chapter" description are so contradictory... it's hilarious. :')Anyways... MY POOR, POOR GAVIN! WHY ARE YOU TORTURING HIM SO MUCH?
| Sweet.Linda chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
The chapter title and your "This is a very lovable, fluffy chapter" description are so contradictory... it's hilarious. :')
Anyways... MY POOR, POOR GAVIN! WHY ARE YOU TORTURING HIM SO MUCH?
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
Just kidding - although, that IS my reaction to your chapter.
Vivian is now dating SETH? But what about Jonah? D: And just... ugh.
Andandandand WHO DIED?
And GAVIN! You broke him. :( Poor thing!
WRITE MORE PLEASE :D
| Sweet.Linda chapter 10 . 4/25/2011
OH MY GOD!
Did Lily try killing Jonah before or something?
How could Kairi and Izzy leave her alone and watch the basketball game? D:
AND GAVIN! MY POOR, POOR GAVIN!
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 10 . 4/25/2011
SO MANY EMOTIONS
There was pretty fluff, intensely dramatic stuff, and you explained the sports well.
Why'd you have to give Jonah's other girl the same nickname as me though? T_T So awkward to read.
Oh well. LOL I'm just being picky. That's all that I found wrong. xD
| Izzy chapter 10 . 4/25/2011
I'm so out of character heere f.
LOL After winning the game Aiden prob found me sleeping in the stands
TROLOLOLOLOL * hates sports*
STOP MAKING AIDEN LIKE ME QAQ
SETHH IS SO MUCH BETTERERERER
| Sweet.Linda chapter 9 . 4/21/2011
LOL! This chapter was flippen' hilarious! :')
Daph & Brie are finally seeing the resemblence between them! Yay! :)
Omgosh, Kairi is so... helpless. She's always the first to get hurt, and needs protecting. xD
Ouu, Izzy is such a flirt. She has two boys wrapped around her fingers. x]
Update soon, buddy! :D
| STEF chapter 9 . 4/20/2011
writing this as i read
THE FIRST LINE! Crayons!
PAINT FIGHT! KAIRI'S MUTANT BABIES LOLOLOL AND AND LESBIANS WITH LILY
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 9 . 4/20/2011
Can I marry this chapter? It was fantastic! I freakin' loved it! Gaah, so awesome! Check msn for whatever else I said. WRITE SOON.
| Emmeline C. Thornbrooke chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Good start, but all the head hopping is annoying.
| Sweet.Linda chapter 8 . 4/2/2011
YEUSH A NEW CHAPTER!
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 8 . 4/2/2011
This was so awesome! The fighting was good. :D
The garden is such a nice idea aosdunsid I love it !