|Reviews for Apple Bottom Academy Edited|
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
OKAY FIRST: AWESOME CHAPTER. THE MWAHAHAHAHA-ING WAS HILARIOUS. SO ME. LOVED IT. YOUR WRITING IS GETTING SO MUCH BETTER, BEE TEE DUBS.
SECOND: ASDUNSIOUAIDNASD HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? -_-"
THIRD: WHO THE HELL ARE JONNIE AND VI? You call me Vi... so that was supah dupaah awkward to read. LOL.
Write again soon! :D
| Fresh and Formal chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
i see you named the General, Derren, good choice. aha, i love that name too! :')
my "parents" are sick. and and, get this.. since it was Derren's tree, and Valerie's tree too... and Brie's tree.. it's a family tree! get it? AHAHAH, omfg, i killed myself when i thought of that.
annd lily, izzy and kairi are jokes, awh man. :')
ANYWAYS, lol, i ramble too much.
i basically loved this chapter :D
| Fresh and Formal chapter 6 . 1/31/2011
too lazy to sign in, LOL
I love Izzy's POVs, they make my day!
| Cheshire.Stripes chapter 5 . 1/31/2011
Lol, Kairi has a crush.
This chapter was alright, don't beat yourself up over it.
| Cheshire.Stripes chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Oh noes. Detention is not going to end well. Nice chappie.
| Cheshire.Stripes chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
It does seem like there are a lot of characters, but hopefully we'll allbe able to get them straight in our heads, yeah?
Well, uh, nice chapter. Btw, do you play Kingdom Hearts? 'Cuz there's a girl named Kairi in them.
| stef chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL KAIRI'S PART LOLOLOLOL the book *dies*
ommg lol D: MY paRT WAS SO SHORT (u)
lily had better be ok. OAO and please dont tell me Jonah is in the room with her because Izzy WILL puke. **
| Sweet.Linda chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
a.) Lily has officialy lost it.
b.) Awwh, Brie's parents' story is really cute. x]
c.) LOL! Kairi made my day. Omgosh, the book she randomly picked out... :')
d.) I thought Aaron WAS from Vampira? :
Anywaays, update soon please! x]
When are we gonna visit everyone's worlds, eh? D:
| xoxo chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
| Sweet.Linda chapter 6 . 1/16/2011
Awwh, Gavin didn't have that many parts. :(
And, Brie didn't come up to us. Grr.
Update soon please! :)
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 6 . 1/14/2011
I LIKED KAIRI'S SHIT-FLIPPING. IT WAS FANTASITIC. BRIE SHOULD HAVE COME UP TO US. -.- STUPID BRIE.
I'M TOO LAZY TO PRESS THE CAPS BUTTON AGAIN...
| stef chapter 6 . 1/14/2011
THAT WAS SO GOOD WHAT THE BLOODY HELL ARE U SMOKING!
XD Yess for my lonerness OAO im suprised i survived my training ( whatever it was LOL) D; THANK YOUU FOR THIS OMG iT WAS SO NICE T_T now back to exams *dies once more*
| Fresh and Formal chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
pixie torturer! LOL
i think jonah singing was the highlight :')
but, i'm starting to think that you ending chapters with brie and a cliff hanger is going to become a constant. -.-
| shteffff chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
D: UWAHH ;A; poor Blaze
| Phoenix.Secrets chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
"In her mind she saw flashes of darkness, of laughter, of singing, of music. She could feel the heat, the sweat, the happiness. Then, she remembered timbits of despair, regret, desperation, anger.
Of loss, of coldness, of feeling the world fall around her.
And she remembered beautiful blue eyes."
You better write sometime soon! Cause I want to know what that means! *evil glare*
Great chappie though. (:
P.S. Remind me to ask you about the necklaces. x)