Reviews for Apple Bottom Academy Edited
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 8 . 4/2/2011
This was so awesome! The fighting was good. :D

The garden is such a nice idea aosdunsid I love it !
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
OKAY FIRST: AWESOME CHAPTER. THE MWAHAHAHAHA-ING WAS HILARIOUS. SO ME. LOVED IT. YOUR WRITING IS GETTING SO MUCH BETTER, BEE TEE DUBS.

SECOND: ASDUNSIOUAIDNASD HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? -_-"

THIRD: WHO THE HELL ARE JONNIE AND VI? You call me Vi... so that was supah dupaah awkward to read. LOL.

Write again soon! :D
Fresh and Formal chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
i see you named the General, Derren, good choice. aha, i love that name too! :')

my "parents" are sick. and and, get this.. since it was Derren's tree, and Valerie's tree too... and Brie's tree.. it's a family tree! get it? AHAHAH, omfg, i killed myself when i thought of that.

annd lily, izzy and kairi are jokes, awh man. :')

ANYWAYS, lol, i ramble too much.

i basically loved this chapter :D
Fresh and Formal chapter 6 . 1/31/2011
too lazy to sign in, LOL

I love Izzy's POVs, they make my day!

MY TREE!
Cheshire.Stripes chapter 5 . 1/31/2011
Lol, Kairi has a crush.

This chapter was alright, don't beat yourself up over it.

Onward!

-Dark.
Cheshire.Stripes chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Oh noes. Detention is not going to end well. Nice chappie.

-Dark.
Cheshire.Stripes chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
It does seem like there are a lot of characters, but hopefully we'll allbe able to get them straight in our heads, yeah?

Well, uh, nice chapter. Btw, do you play Kingdom Hearts? 'Cuz there's a girl named Kairi in them.

-Dark.
stef chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL KAIRI'S PART LOLOLOLOL the book *dies*

ommg lol D: MY paRT WAS SO SHORT (u)

lily had better be ok. OAO and please dont tell me Jonah is in the room with her because Izzy WILL puke. **
Sweet.Linda chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
LMAOLMAOLMAO!

a.) Lily has officialy lost it.

b.) Awwh, Brie's parents' story is really cute. x]

c.) LOL! Kairi made my day. Omgosh, the book she randomly picked out... :')

d.) I thought Aaron WAS from Vampira? :

Anywaays, update soon please! x]

When are we gonna visit everyone's worlds, eh? D:
xoxo chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
fag.
Sweet.Linda chapter 6 . 1/16/2011
LOL!

Amazing chapter!

Awwh, Gavin didn't have that many parts. :(

And, Brie didn't come up to us. Grr.

Update soon please! :)
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 6 . 1/14/2011
HI.

AWESOMETASTIC CHAPTER.

UPDATE MORE.

I LIKED KAIRI'S SHIT-FLIPPING. IT WAS FANTASITIC. BRIE SHOULD HAVE COME UP TO US. -.- STUPID BRIE.

I'M TOO LAZY TO PRESS THE CAPS BUTTON AGAIN...

KBYE.
stef chapter 6 . 1/14/2011
THAT WAS SO GOOD WHAT THE BLOODY HELL ARE U SMOKING!

XD Yess for my lonerness OAO im suprised i survived my training ( whatever it was LOL) D; THANK YOUU FOR THIS OMG iT WAS SO NICE T_T now back to exams *dies once more*
Fresh and Formal chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
pixie torturer! LOL

i think jonah singing was the highlight :')

but, i'm starting to think that you ending chapters with brie and a cliff hanger is going to become a constant. -.-
shteffff chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
D: UWAHH ;A; poor Blaze
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