loved it..glad albany is willing to give him a chance and to forgive him

-Groans-

It was short, but then that was a fast update. So I'm not complaining. :) Thanks!

Forgiving, eh? Yorkie was definitely sly on this part.

Good chapter. Good chapter. :)

It shows character development of Nik and he seems to be able to 'control' himself to a certain degree. :o It's a good thing Albany and Nik are making up again.

Awesome, I really enjoyed it. (YESSS! Definitely get Ben a girl! I like his character and want hm to have an ark...a romantic ark :) ) Loved the fast update and good last few chapters. I dont know how shes gonna forgive him, I mean, itll be hard Im sure. Excited to read more!

Ben won't do that with Marian around. He'll behave with her. :D Oh! Oh! Do that for a sequel!

I never saw the words 'gay' and 'wolf' in the same context before. It seems very different when it's being implied and when it's seen.

You moved fine in terms of context and speed. It is so depressing that you ended the chapter abruptly though... because it was definitely getting interesting. :D

Yorkie... I'm pretty sure that wolves can smell arousal... so Nik may take it the wrong way?

By the way, a few grammatical errors, no big deal. You can also use a bit more description. Sometimes it is unclear that an action is taking place (she tasted Nik) until it is written afterwards(ex: Albany kissed Nik harder). :o It helps to visualize what is going on when the action is spoken first. ;)

... I don't really understand why Nik does not seem to understand that he hurt Albany. Would a wolf have acted differently if they were raped? Nik seems to be very sincere in trying to gain Albanys attention, I kinda feel bad for him, but I also think he should try to understand... Comparing this chapter to the story that comes after, Albany was hypocritical in telling the girl that one should never run from their mate, after all is was what she did and the only reason she returned was because he went and got her...

I feel sorry for her. Please update soon :D

I was very excited to see you updated. I'm loving how Nik is starting to realize what he was really oding and how that effected her. I hope he continues to grow and be gentle. I would have loved to see when she and Yorkie were picking out clothes. You said she had lost weight so, it would have been nice to see how she reacted to the new clothes and how they looked on her. I also think they could have a cute time. I wish we got some insight to that, but I loved that you updated! I like seeing this slightly wounded side of Nik!

I really love this story since i found it way back when :)

I dont think its moving slow at all..I like the pace at which we see

them interact right now...I would love to hear from Nik though..

Just to see his response to all this he is learning from Albany..

Please continue...Take a deep breath relax this is your baby we just

get to enjoy the ride :)

Awe. She's modeling for Nik, how cute! No offense to Albany, but she's kind of being a bitch to Nik. I mean, I get where you are coming from, but seriously? He cooked for you! A lot of guys don't even know how to cook, like my brother. I don't know, they're both being assholes to each other. I think it's time for them to grow up. Maybe the modeling will be like bonding time. :)

Someone actually asked what the Elder Scrolls was? O.O I'm in shock! Everyone should know about how awesome that game is! And I apologise in advance for the lack of reviews I shall be writing you in November, 3 weeks and counting!

On to the chapter which was awesome by the way.

I'm really liking the nicer side to Nik which makes me want Albany to forgive him despite what an arse he was before...That was a hint by the way ;)

I'm off! Got to do lots of uni work before the 11th November because I sure as hell won't be getting anything done after that date!

you DO NOT need to start anew...it's just, Albany's getting a bit too mean for my taste. she and nik need to talk about this. or nik HAS to get angry and confront her and make her listen that he's not a monster and that everyone deserves a second chance. but no, don't let him get off the hook that easy. I can understand if you'd want Albany to make him prove that he's not an asshole, but come on, from what i've read Albany's a pretty good girl, you need to keep that consistent because she's becoming a real bitch and it's sort of off-character. good luck !:)

I actually liked this chapter, and i didnt think is was going to slow at all, i really would have liked it if you got through the modeling scene... i really want to see niki's reaction to the clothes and the underwear )... i imagine it will turn out quite funny with him trying to keep his emotions under control and wanting to kick the other guy out of the room while not appearing to be an ass in his mates eyes, over all i liked the side of nick that's just trying to be a good guy and win her over, it would be kind of nice to have a chapter from his point of view now too so that we can see what he is thinking about the things that she says and how well he is handling his new "nice guy" image. thanks for the chapter i always love reading them even though i don't always review

I WANT MORE STORY! GRRRRRrr. Anyways, that felt so short! Like it was building up to something, and then you just cut the climax out... cliffhanger, I suppose, but that doesn't mean that I have to like it. I definitely liked the increased amount of description in this chapter; made the characters/events more fleshed out/real. Ummm, other than that... it was great! :D

No I don't think the story went too slow. It was just getting interesting.

Loved this chapter! This chapter is like a filler chapter and you said you wanted to be more descriptive so its perfect. Also considering how speedy you're updating (Yey!) I doubt anyone minds that things move a little slower in some chapters. Keep updating! :)