Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is
sneaky-fox chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
"I guess Nik would see something" lol!

I like how Albany seems more self confident and how she (willingly or not) has let Nik know how she sees him.. he deserved it but I must admit I actually felt a bit bad for him this chapter, but then again he deserved it!

Thanks for updating so often, you made my day :)
Efra chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
Honestly, I loved this chapter. He is suck a asshole. I really want him to suffer. He doesn't deserve someone like her.

I believe the grandmother is kinda off... Like she isn't really flowing... That's just me.

And I love how Albany keeps putting one blow after another.

I can actually feel how him being gentel is werid. Like even I would be freaked out and I could totally feel the emotion.

This story is different from many other 'wolf' stories because it has the mate being a asshole and not getting it, top of that I really want him to begg for foregiveness. Lol I don't know if I'm making any sense.

He seriously needs to learn for this experience and not change completely but learn how wrong he was for not trusting her.

I would love to see another hot character come in and treat her better than nik does.

I really hate dicks like him. Lol
Initially loaded chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
loved this. im thinking that maybe her and Nik could sit down and talk about everything - it all just seems tennsssse right now.
sherrylynn chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
I liked the return of yorkie he seems fun and it was nice to see some sweet side of Nic
ebs12 chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
Nick might be getting nicer but that doesn't mean that he doesn't owe a giant apology still...and his testicles on a silver platter. Update soon :)
bloodlore chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
I didn't think this chapter moved slow at all. It had me on my toes trying to figure out Nik's sudden change in personality. I love the way you're writing it and I love the mystery to it.
lovebookz chapter 20 . 10/23/2011
im really sad that we wont be seen Georgia's story for a while but i guess i will have to deal with that :(... i like how in the last too chapters we can see some real emotion out of nik's character..it hurts me to see how albany is treating nik even thugh she has a reason cant wait to see how their happily ever after occours
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 19 . 10/20/2011
As you may or may not tell, I am a new reader. Nik is a major douche. The alpha of the assholes, but yet for some reason, I can't help but love him. I mean, he freaking raped his mate and destroyed her life, yet I just can't help but love him. It's just...blah.

Anyway. Finally, a story where the leading female isn't a skinny little thing with brown hair and brown eyes. (Those authors that write about the "regular people" sometimes have a one track mind.) I myself may not be chubby, but it's nice to know that there are people out there that aren't little sticks. (Disregard the fact that I can squeeze into size 1's.)

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :)
bluecowsmooo chapter 19 . 10/19/2011
I don't know how I feel about this new side of Nik. Although you said that you would never write another chapter in Nik's point of view, I would love to see what he is thinking and the reasoning behind his personality change, if any, other than obviously to make Albany happy.
Initially loaded chapter 18 . 10/19/2011
dun dun dun dahhhh. CANT WAIT FOR MORRREEEE
Midnight113 chapter 19 . 10/19/2011
Amazing chapter, I loved it! Seeing this gentle side to Nik was really sweet. It looks like he's really starting to think about stuff. I also liked how you brought Marian in and gave that 'family' element. Things feel different, warmer even. I really like it. I wish my grandmother was like Marian, she's just awesome, lol. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Efra chapter 19 . 10/19/2011
Wow it unnerved me too when he was acting all gentle.

I loved this story so far. I usually don't give reviews but I want you to know that this is one of my favorites stories.

So I'm waiting for the next chapter to be out.

Please update soon. My days are so much better when I can escape into great stories like this one
xxxreviewerxxx chapter 19 . 10/19/2011
Seriously someone wrote that your 'story was painful to read?' LOL if they thought that why did they continue to read? They could have stopped.

Anyway, I love your story and hope you ignore this silly person. It's probably just an attention seeker.

I like your story as Albany is written really well, in fact I find her to be extremely annoying. I think you intended her to be that way as she's an omega thrust into the position of an alpha female, that coupled with her insecurities makes her resist what's happening - i.e. she's attracted to Nik but can't quite understand why he would like her.

I hope you continue to write this story and don't go on a long hiatus again.

:)
NicerTwin chapter 19 . 10/18/2011
I like this chapter. I'd like to see nik grovel a bit more tho :)
mjlhdragondancer chapter 19 . 10/18/2011
Nic being nice is blowing my mind. SO CUTE! I like this possessive/in control of himself/nice and thoughtful Nic much better. Falling in love with him as a character! 3 3 3
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