I'm seriously in love with this story! I've read 3, this being the third by you and I'll prob read another one. I love the way you write these characters! I just can't wait to see what happens next between the two!

okay so I didn't read the author note until after I read and reviewed chapter 19 so now I had to go back to chapter 1 to be able to comment on it :-/ damn stupid review rule ;)

I basically just waned to say that who ever wrote your stories are painfull to read are obviously deranged, not because they can't have an opinion but because your stories are well written and in my opinion absolutely amazing ;)

And about your characters being likeable... that is what sets you apart, you dare to have main characters that are (for lack of a better word) bastards!

That doesn't mean we don't hope they get better and sweeter but it makes the stories much more believable and interesting!

Okay now I'm off to bed.. peace out ;)

Yes! Nic was nice for a change, there is still hope for him ;)

And he so deserved hearing the truth from Madeline, plus that girl yelled at 2 alphas and lived... she's to cool for school!

KnH thanks for another great chapter :)

This is a really good. Please update soon :D

My new awesome favorite character: Marian.

Maybe She'll help Albany out? :D Grandmothers always do help each other out... and she did meet Marian before. :o

Albany has the right to doubt Nik. I mean, who would just come back and act so gentle? It would have been beyond creepy. Maybe he did change...

Main Characters are always likeable. :D ... Besides the villans, that is.

Madeline standing up to the wolf,s was good way to start the chapter

I knew we were destined to like each other! Skyrim! I can't wait for it either, I think I should just write off the whole month of November...probably December too...Why don't we just call it January and see where we go.

As for readers posting horrible reviews, I've had my fair share and trust me when I say you don't deserve any of them. It's really annoying when people say horrible things or ask questions about you as a writer and leave you NO means of contacting them. It makes me feel as if they have no idea how much work we put into these stories.

I ADORE your stories and don't let anyone tell you that they're anything less than absolutely awesome because they're amazing.

Hus and internet cookies my fellow Elder Scrollian ;)

Great update so happy your deciding to focus on this story because this Is definitely my favorite one! I'm not sure how I feel about Nik right now if I was Albany I would definitely be on my guard. As for the people who are sending you those horrible reviews no worries they are just being punks. Looking forward to the next update :)

Hi!

And again, an amazing chapter from your hands!

Everything seemd so quiet, but I felt the innter tension.

You are an amazing writer, but I'm certainly not the first to say that!

I don't exactly love, not bc of ur writing but bc of all the things that she has gone through with, for and bc of him. But the reunion was not as bad as I had imagined it would be. I am happy she has not gotten physically hurt, I do think that he was to grovel to get her to see him as her mate, it cant always be them (as in most of the male wolves of ur stories) doing anything and everything they want to the females. Well it can but it shouldn't. I mean I was under the impression that a mate was a sacred thing to protect even from themselves, and they hardly show any respecet to them.

But all in all I have enjoyed reading her tale and hope u UD soon. I am curious to see if she is accepted in the pack now that it has changed a little. And whats up with Ben? He was the biggest douche bag every and now seems to just mind his own. Did nik finally tell him to watch his mouth about her? If so I am happy he has.

I understand needing to focus on one story at a time-I try to do that too but I end up switching often.

And I LOVE that I don't love (or even like) a lot of your main characters. It makes them seem more real, I guess. Especially when I think about how many people I interact with daily that I genuinely like.

Good chapter. I'm happy that they're back together (in a very literal sense of the word-same location) and it's interesting seeing this other side of Nik. I hope Albany starts making an effort to get along, too.

Have fun with Elder Scrolls-is that a game? But don't forget about your stories! I get a little giddy when I get an email about your updates.

i didnt want her to leave with Nik but it was still a good chapter. cant wait to read more

I can't wait to see more! love your story :)

I'm not trying to be cruel, but I find it hard to finish or continue reading ALL of your stories.

This is where I stop. Your writing is always full of grammar and tense mistakes which don't really do any favours for already poorly constructed characters.

Through your creation of your female characters, it seems as if you hate women. Something which I cannot fathom.

I am voicing my opinions as someone who as read all your stories. Although to your defence, I haven't actually finished any of them seeing as it always becomes to painful to read.

I recommend you either:

a) seriously rethink your idea of a 'strong' or at least 'likeable' female and male lead.

b) look for a beta. Or even start reading what you've written for each chapter before you post it.

c) stop writing all together.

Noo! I actually came to an end with the chapter! DX

Good story btw. Good cliffhanger. I just feel like something is missing... sensory details can be improved, yeah... but that wasn't what I was thinking.

Thanks for the chapters though. :) Very amazing. Wondering how Albany can survive this. Also, a bunch of time changed. Did she get skinner? xD

I wonder if Nik can change. I mean, he's been a feral wolf since the beginning of the chapter, and now even after 18 chapters, the readers don't know what has happened. Evil cliffie is evil.