Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so is he gonna come after her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, cant wait to read the next chapter. (what a sucky review I wrote, I want to go in to detail WHY I loved it so much but Im very lazy. So sorry, next time! Ill have a nice beef review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so excited to see u updated! Anyway back to business...I'm so shocked at how Madeline lets her mom insult her husband! Could u imagine the psychological damage Madeline's mom would to do Madeline's kids? Madeline should seriously consider cutting her mom out of her life. If her mom can't accept who she married, her mom would never accept her kids. Madeline's mom is VICIOUS! She's more ANIMAL than the werewolves are. I understand why Albany left as soon as she could! Sooooooo...why is the neighbor boy so interested in Albany? I'm soooo wanting Albany in a love triangle though we all know James would get massacred! Albany should get a chance at playing a cougar! Can she be called a cougar even though she's a wolf? LOL! Too funny! I'm looking forward to reading more updates! |
![]() ![]() The chapter was short, but atleast your continuing to write because I love this story. Hopefully we'll get a good long one soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent confrontation, I loved the power and strength in that scene with the characters. Go Albany! Great work, more please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so short? |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay a new chapter and a great one at that! I'm so happy you are back! I hope we will see Albany kick Nik's ass soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't believe that is what she had to put up with as a mother figure that is one crazy aunt. i can't wait to see what is goin to happen next with albany forming a friendship with the boy next door thank you for updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kept telling myself once I started to get near chapter 15 and then 16 that I should stop reading. I had already came to far and had gotten sucked into the story to much to stop reading thoug, I knew once I got to chapter 17 it would stop. :( I know we all have lives outside of this site but I really wish you would continue soon. I aboustly Love this story now! THough I'm still kinda curious as to why she had woken up in the hospital? What had happened once she had left the alpha's house? |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa... WAY TO GO ALBANY :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is really good. Please update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! An update! I can't wait to see what Nic plans next! I hope that he goo all alpha on Albany! lol. I love that jealous/furious relationship they have going on! Its just sooo... Idk... Awesome? lol. Well, I hope that you update soon! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're right Nik is an ASS haha but we love him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this POV was just fine. It would have been weird if you'd switched from first person narrative to omniscient. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. Please update soon :D |