Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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MadameLeQueen chapter 16 . 9/25/2011 OH GOD UPDATE! FOR THE LOVE OF THE HEAVENS UPDATE! I've been DYING for an update ;_; The idea is so great, so original that i love it to bits and pieces xD and welcome back! i'm so excited for the next chapter, gaaaaahhhhhhh |
sneaky-fox chapter 16 . 9/25/2011 yay finally a new chapter! :) Nic scares me, he seems to be getting more and more fucked up... I hope for Albanys sake that he sees reason Thanks for being a great author! :) |
Initially loaded chapter 16 . 9/25/2011 i really really dislike Nik |
novels chapter 16 . 9/24/2011 im so glad you finally updated again! hopefully another one is in the near future! |
larkkb chapter 16 . 9/24/2011 More more! XDD |
chicagobabe chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 Lmao. Im glad you did. oh god, how I've missed you3 I'm glad that everything is alright (: and liked the chapter btw, but dear god how I loathe Nik! And even though she was gone for a month, he is still a cocky bastard! Lol, you did a fine job building his character, hence the reason I like this story :D |
Midnight113 chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 If it's any consolation I thought you did a great job with his POV. I enjoyed it and I liked getting more info on him and his thoughts. Good job! |
AuraVybrid chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 YAY! finally! i've been waiting i hope ur hubby is feelin just great, i love ur stories and to me u can do no wrong, haha :) update as soon as u can:) toodles, |
ghdfgh chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 yes! a chapter ha ha. i liked the chapter it was good. I cant wait to see what happens next |
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 AMAZING story :D |
Jennyt82 chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Even though you didn't enjoy writing the chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Welcome back. I hope everything is getting better on the home front ) |
starchild8790 chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 im so happy you're back this chapter was different but still really good cant wait for more |
Vivi-Annie chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 I have to agree, I prefer when you write in Albany's POV. The writing felt awkward until the middle where it seemed to have more flow but then it turned awkward again. On the other hand, at least you still made the chapter so that it progressed the story along. It didn't seem like a filler chapter, so kudos. vivi-annie |
ebs12 chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Very glad your plot bunny returned - would love to meet Nik's mother. Could be very interesting. Update soon :) |
JBrooke chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Love :) hope you update again soon |