Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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missmarymacintosh chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Awww, I really really liked Niks POV, but I suppose whatever you do will be good. Love the chapter and good job updating! |
Casefile chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Ah, thanks for the update! I kind of see why you don't want to write from Nik's point of view but I think it made a nice "side story". It brought the story something new. Next chapter sounds interesting, cant wait for it! |
alchem chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 As I read the chapter again and then went back and reread the other ones... I can understand why you didn't like writing from Nik's point of view. It kind of feels like he has completely lost his humanity and the story is going to turn into a horror story instead of a romance. Overall, I like the writing and I like the story. I recommend your bring some of his history into the story, and put some nice things into his soul. I'm afraid that once he finds Albany he is just going to murder everyone in his path. I really don't want to see her die a horrible violent death. Can she help find his soul before it is a blood bath? Thank you for writing, thank you for sharing on fiction press. I like the work and hope you continue to work it. |
MarielleMonster chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Hi! Well, You said you don't like to write in Nik's pov, but it was quite good actually! You are right, Nik is too serious, dominant, crazy and indeed -an ass BUT we do all like him for who he is, right? Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to read more. ~ (Can't wait to meet his mom D) Bye! |
Stormie-Daze chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 Other than the shortness I thought it fine, I was getting tired of it all being in Albany's point of view, I wanted to know what was going on if you kept going with Albany then the story would be stale unless you can keep it lively. |
Dreams-of-Fairies chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 *squeal* your back your back your back your back YEA! Super super happy! *runs around in circles throwing flowers* ... so yea nik needs to lay off the doggy biscuits :/ love it! |
smrae chapter 16 . 9/22/2011 You updated! Welcome back! I love your stories and I hope your plot bunny keeps it together haha. Nik is a little boring but I think you definitely did him justice in this chapter. He is definitely getting crazier though haha and I hope Albany is okay! She is definitely my favorite character and Georgia too in your stories! They are tough chicas! I can't wait for the next update! |
xxxreviewerxxx chapter 16 . 9/21/2011 Hurray, I'm so glad you're gonna update. |
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 16 . 9/19/2011 I love the story! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! Have a good day! |
sweetbutneverinnocent chapter 16 . 9/16/2011 I FORGOT THESE WERE ALL YOUR STORIES! Well..i do hope your life gets better.. |
Dreams-of-Fairies chapter 14 . 9/14/2011 Update! Update! U meanie face! T.T I wanna know moooreeee! Eh! Pretty please! I've reread this storie three times now and and I gots ta know morez! Update! Update! |
quill.and.inkk chapter 15 . 8/4/2011 Oh my! this is quite a yummy predictament. I also love your author notes at the end, it reminds me of a soap opera preview for the next epsiode lol. Very lovely! |
Hajaley chapter 15 . 8/2/2011 Please can you update soon? I want to know what is going to happen next. I'm sure Nik is going to mad and will come to find her. Oh, can't wait. |
Sophy chapter 15 . 7/23/2011 i don't know whether it'll be too sadistic for Albany and Ben to meet after so many years - on second thought I think that meeting would be quite interesting! Can't wait to see Nik's point of view after all this! That might be refreshing for the readers. ...does the stalker-boy have a history with Albany? Is it just stalking or is there a crush involved? Can't wait to read a new chapter! So exciting! |
NicerTwin chapter 14 . 7/20/2011 seriously...nik needs to be castrated. as well as his brick building of a beta |