Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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Pippa892 chapter 15 . 5/23/2011 You write with a lovely style - i enjoyed your other stories as well. I know that Albany and Nik get together in the end (see - i read Whole Other Country!)so i think having Ben in is un-necessary, especially since you had the whole, Alpha going after her to get at Nick thing. the little creepy dude could realy add a good twist to the story. looking forward to where you go with this. |
crissy19 chapter 15 . 5/17/2011 i think the window creep may be working for nick! better watch out albany, u may see a pissed off nick very soon. |
Lexy7432 chapter 15 . 5/17/2011 I think there's more to the 19 yo stalker guy lol and I can't wait to find out what. |
RitaHouston chapter 15 . 5/15/2011 luv this cant wait fo more |
sillygoose2008 chapter 15 . 5/14/2011 i like all the new characters you have added since she has left nick. it is kind of fresh to see new things, please write more about the aunt and i am very interested in the perv neighbor and if would be fun to know why Ben is there. However i feel that the next few chapters of yours should be concentrating on the drama of Albany's life in Rhode Island done bring in Nick to soon. because you have done so much work on all these new people that Albany has gotten involved in that, they should be your focus point and later you can do what you want with nick and Albany. but that is just my opinion i don't know how you have set this story up or if you already have chapter written and will be giving them to us one by one. anyway its a good story. keep up the work and please start posting your chapters alot sooner, i know now that you are trying like for these last two chapters but i use to wait for weeks and longer just for one chapter but still thank you and i am a fan of your work. |
ThatGirl chapter 15 . 5/14/2011 Although I am enjoying the story line, I think you might be moving too fast. You are adding in more drama, all in two chapters, and even though your writing style is addicting, building the plot slowly but surely is more satisfying in the end. Great job! Keep up the writing! |
NovelS chapter 15 . 5/14/2011 I always get so excited when I see you updated. Not quite sure whats going to happen with the neighbor though...where does he even tie in to this? & Maybe Ben would be adding too much stuff all at once, but if you wanted to i have no doubt you could make it work |
MissMaryMacintosh chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 This is amazing! I love it, cant wait to read more! (Id log in but FP is being evil to me! ;( it took forever for it to let me leave this review, anyway, love the update! |
JBrooke chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 I bet nik gains forgiveness by saving Albany from the weird kid... Only to screw up again ;) can't wait to find out :D |
dramaqueen94 chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 you are very cruel you need to update quicker lol but you are doing an awesome job i love all you stories :) |
Vivi-Annie chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 Stalker? Creepy much... I really want to see how he progresses. And is Nik keeping tags on Albany? If he is will he find out about the stalker? I'm on the search for answers and the only way I can find out is if you update... so update soon, pretty please! *puppy dog eyes* Vivi-Annie }- |
M.S.S92 chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 Hey i think the creepy neghbor is a wolf? Looking foreward to the next chapter.. please update soon |
moonlitsunset92 chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 yay! new chapter! anyway I think you should have Ben come and let Albany have some closure from him. just a suggestion i don't mean to be mean lol : ) |
Midnight113 chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 Awesome chapter, I'm curious about the creepy neighbor and I can't wait to see what's in store with her Aunt. I'd like to see Ben introduced... maybe he could cause some issues in the drama department. ;) Keep up the good work, I'm anxious for more! |
mihaela chapter 15 . 5/12/2011 oh please make Albany and Nik warm up to each other |