Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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TheSweetAngel18 chapter 25 . 8/30/2012 oooo dun dun duuuunnnn! love your story! re-read it after soo long and i hope u continue on it soon! yeah b4 it didnt seem finished with her being prego.. kinda felt like a lazy end. this story can go on longer. feels that it needs it for us (the readers) to really feel that nick and albany have made themselves a healthy relationship, take care! |
Sin-and-Smokin chapter 25 . 8/28/2012 This story is absolutely brilliant! A pity it hasn't been updated in a while... I hope you update when u can |
BlAcKMaCgICWoMeN chapter 22 . 7/28/2012 i think that what she gets *him ignoring her* because you can only wait for someone so long when you hold hatred in your heart your no better then the person you cant forgive |
magnanimousSquirrel chapter 25 . 7/25/2012 Ok, now I don't like Albany. -_- |
magnanimousSquirrel chapter 23 . 7/25/2012 Um...is it bad that I don't find Albany annoying? I've been on her side this whole time... |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/6/2012 Hey, really great story! First things first.. did you mean, throw up the lamb? ;-) And she is a wolf, everyone knows it? Or why is she talking about this so freely to a salesperson? And she must be able to detect all the wonderful smells and everything like to hear his words, when he is talking or whispering in the same room, well? But I really like your story, nevertheless! :-) Mira |
OMG chapter 25 . 3/19/2012 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU! UPDATE SOON! I love your writing and I read it all in one day...yes I have no life |
empress11690 chapter 11 . 2/14/2012 UP...DATTTEEE! fuck! lol. I am dieing here! |
D. M. Gotmen chapter 25 . 1/21/2012 Whoa. So what happen's now that she's met the mother? Why was Nik tense? She seemed nice enough from what I've read... Anyways. Please update soon! :) |
lovetodisappoint chapter 25 . 1/4/2012 Wow I would say this is really good but that would be an insult! It's really hard to find interesting werewolf/ mate stories, you should consider publishing. I actually went to the library after I had read a couple of chapters and could not find a a book I wanted to read was this story! Please update! |
adlerose chapter 25 . 12/29/2011 I really liked this story when i first chance upon it. But truth be told, I really think that the story went downhill after chapter 11. The sequence of events became really jumpy, the sentences choppy. And the characters just became unlikable. All of a sudden I couldn't understand much of were Albany's aggression was coming from though I know it's there just not clearly stated in the story. Nik's character might have not suffered if the transition from the feral wolf to a caring lover was done a bit smoother. The phase was good but it was like prancing rather than a gait. I would love to reread this after a good editing. |
Genato chapter 25 . 12/19/2011 update please! :D |
Fifi18 chapter 25 . 12/9/2011 More please ... love it. I'm glad Albany finally came out of her stubborness. |
Supa-ninja123 chapter 25 . 12/3/2011 Awsome! Love it! Lol i read ur story with Molly first and i thought Nik was an ass, but i take it back now :D i love this pair sooo much. Too bad it has to end already :( anyway great work! |
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 25 . 11/17/2011 AWESOME AWESOME chapters :D Sorry I havent reviewed lately, but I still think this story is AMAZING! |