Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is
kally chapter 14 . 5/4/2011
Ohmygosh I nearly squealed when I saw you had updated! I'm glad Albany managed to get away from Nik and now hopefully she can sort out her life and figure out what she wants to do about the crazy alpha! I hope this also completely screws with Nik enough that he realizes he was treating her so bad that she felt like her only option was to run! Update soon!
smrae chapter 14 . 5/4/2011
Great update! Glad your back this story is great :). I think the tone worked out well and I look forward to finding out more about Albany and her past. Hope you update soon!
jellybeancurd chapter 14 . 5/4/2011
She's FINALLY getting stronger! What happens next promises to be very exciting! Awesome story! Please update soon)
DorkExpress chapter 13 . 5/3/2011
Poor chick, she's always harrased and why in the world don't they understand her and her complexity?

Please update soon!

XOXO
sweetneverinnocent chapter 13 . 4/15/2011
That is a terrible cliffhanger! OH Em GEE! Really? Gosh...you make me sad? 0_0
dery888z chapter 13 . 4/12/2011
those 2 seriously need to work out their issues. he doesn't trust her, she doesn't love him; she's overly emotional and stubborn, he's insensitive and self-absorbed; she was raised with human relationships, he's all wolf pack shit; etc. seriously though, he needs to get a clue about relationships. she needs a life - friends, job, etc. he's got no right to take those away, practically enslaving her at this point, and still expect a healthy and loving relationship. good lord. and she needs to find some middle ground with her wolf, and start thinking rationally. they're both ridiculous. bravo to you for that. i can't wait to see the process of how these two work out their fucked-upness. that said, i think its past time you update. with chapters, plural. long, long chapters. hell, you promised us family appearances, a month is long enough for you to deliver. please? please post more soon
Ashley chapter 8 . 4/12/2011
I am sorry you are an amazing writer. The main character is getting stronger and stronger with each trial But there is nothing romantic about rape. Nothing at all and tell the truth it kind of made me hate him. There's no way in hell he is going to win back his way into my esteem
teegan chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I love this story, its so amazing, please update soon!
Lesumi chapter 13 . 3/20/2011
Awesome story! Can't wait to see what you have coming! :D
xharbour chapter 13 . 3/15/2011
UPDATE DAMIT!
sara chapter 13 . 3/15/2011
Also to add on,

Ben insults Albany without any punishment from Nik. Why isn't she saying something about that, moreover if he is her mate why is he not sticking up for her?
sara chapter 13 . 3/15/2011
why does she forgive him like that? He raped her, and now shes always thinking "oh it's my fault" she doesn't seem very 3 dimensional to me as a character. You really need to develop her character more, because what i get from her is that shes "upset" that Nik raped her but is going to live with him still having sex and is lovey dovey with him even though he treats her like shit. All because she needs to get back on her feet? And why does she take it? Please revise this it does not flow.
KMx0x chapter 13 . 3/13/2011
I love this (:

Update soon!

-K
midnight84118 chapter 13 . 3/12/2011
great job

nice she staning up for her self good for her
Believe-In-Faeries chapter 13 . 3/10/2011
I cannot possibly believe there are men this retarded in the world...even in a fantasy world... smh

Nik needs a reality check or a smack in the face...actually he needs someone stronger than him to beat his ass to the ground but i'll take what i can get.

Ben needs his own story...he needs to be stuck with a human see if he'll learn a few things about women...although i feel for the poor woman stuck with him shes gonna need alot of advil...or earplugs.
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