Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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midnight84118 chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 grea job love it |
Midnight113 chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 I like Ben too, sounds like a complex character. I'm glad Albany isn't fighting being a wolf either now, it'll be easier for her to just embrace it since she has no other choice in the matter. Great work, I can't wait for more! |
Ck90 chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 Ben doesn't sound like he has a mate. I understand why he is pissed, I mean it seems like he really had to fight his way to where he was. and I get it survival of the fittest. He is missing some flufiness and love in his life. I bet he can be goey... Nik is not a very understanding wolf is he? Happy writings! |
RonnieMeetsPaper chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 This kinda feels like a filler chapter to me...maybe Nik should forget Albany for a moment (or in otherwords, a distraction) and then she could try to escape...again. Other than that, nice chapter! Update soon! ~Ronnie~ |
Vivi-Annie chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 YAY! Good chapter, I feel totally sorry for Albany, but hey, at least she's trying. Can't wait for the next chapter, and don't worry about the brain freeze, just means your brain is preparing for something big. :) Vivi-Annie }- |
XxVioletAshesxX chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 I don't like Ben |
iRuo chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 update soon please? |
Letyne chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 Thanks for this new chapter |
FallenAngelFromTheSky chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 Even though the chapter was hard for you, it was very good! Please update soon! |
smrae chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 Yay you updated! Sorry you've been having a rough time lately with your writing! Your stories are still amazing and no matter what I will continue to read them no matter what :) so no worries! So I hope Albany continues to fight and show everyone that she may not look the part of the perfect female wolf, but with time (and more running lol) she will totally kick some butt. Haha Seriously though I do love Albany's character and I look forward to her taking over the pack and making everyone absolutely love her. Haha hopefully? Lol can't wait for the next update! |
Da-zGreen chapter 12 . 1/17/2011 hhahahaha. Ben is a douche but hey, he will learn to like Albany! I'm glad that Nik had won the fight with the other alpha... I just hope that he doesn't become an asshole again.. Lol I just hope that things between them will work out.. Also with his father and stuff like that, I wonder if Nik's father and Albany will ever meet.. If they do... Whew, I wonder how that is going to turn out like... Lol I do hope that you update soon though! On to other stuff, I don't know if you got my last email, but you had accepted to become my Beta and I was wondering how I should email you the chapter, but I don't have your email.. Lol. If you can just reply back on this, then that would be fine! Thank you Daisey |
Bubbly Girl chapter 11 . 12/27/2010 Intense! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
adlerose chapter 1 . 12/24/2010 I'm trying to be really patient, waiting for the next chapter! I'm so excited! I even found myself trying to make my own wolf story but all I can think about is whether you have updated already. Man, give us a gift for Christmas! |
Jennyt82 chapter 11 . 12/15/2010 This is getting better with every chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
adlerose chapter 10 . 12/13/2010 That's a nice set of characters! I really like that they have all this flaws! I'm excited for more chapters! and you're officially one of my favorite author! |