Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is
Ck90 chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
The alpha is such an idiot! I personally don't think hewants Albany he showed no interest in her until she smelled like Nik! Was the boob bite his way of trying to make her submit to him and "forget" Nik? Poor girl she gets into more trouble than she can handle!

Happy writings!
Hettiezstar chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
GAH! What a cliff-hanger!

How cruel .

Seamus is so goin' get it now! Nik will probably fight him to become Alpha to ~teach him or something. He'll be damn angry fo'sho.

Seamus isn't even properly attracted to Albany imo; he's attracted to power and her being with Nik means power~

Gosh, I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Update real soon!

MOARNAO

plzkthnxbai
11cina24 chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
lol, this was good. Like this while story is SCARY GOOD(:

Anyway, you need to update faster please! No pressure or anything;)
midnight84118 chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
great job on the new chp
Lady007 chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
yeah an update, this is getting pretty exciting. what is seamus up to? and what has her mate done? getting her fired, burning her appartment... he has some big issues :-)well Im going to look for a new chapter every day as I really want to read more...
violet-eyez chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
and where is nik in all of this he should be coming to her rescue
Neivegirl22 chapter 8 . 8/26/2010
HOLY FUCK!1 dude are you gonna do something about him or just get away with rape?
Twitdit chapter 8 . 8/25/2010
Well hot damn. Lol this chapter was great! :D PLEASE update soon! I love this story!
infinite101 chapter 8 . 8/24/2010
wtf - woah i'm actually kind of scared, he raped her? he actually raped her?.. i knew he was sort of feral but i never thought he'd do that - and all because that Coleman guy kissed her FOREHEAD? This guy has serious issues,

He crossed the line - no it was worse than that - the line's just gone! How could he do that to her? his mate and all that - if he loved her as much as he says he wouldn't have hurt her, (i think i'm not taking into consideration the wolf psyche but none the less)

This fic is great so far, i'm glad it isn't as simple as girl meets guy - they fall in love and that's it,

I'm very glad she stayed away from him - what he did was horrific, damn right she avoided his ass,

'"Just like that, tell him, Ms. Kincaid says to suck your own dick. And hang up."' lol

what i don't understand is why his dad's getting involved,

Looking forward to the next chapter - i have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next - i hope you can update soon
Lara-chan chapter 8 . 8/23/2010
ZOMG he raped her...

*blinks*

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this. lols.

Part of me wants her to give in, but at the same time I want her to be all- I am woman, hear me roar!

I wonder what dad is going to do? hm..

can't wait for the next!
random chapter 8 . 8/21/2010
will find out she's pregnant and freak outand start missing nik and seamus comes alongand be's all friendly with her, then seamus tries to kiss her

sees seamus kiss albany, thinks the baby is seamus's (i don't know how he knows about the baby, he just does) kills seamus, becomes alpha and has millions of babys with albany (though albany first beeats him to a bloody pulp for hurting her)

option 2

becomes a hunter and kills everyone

2. seamus dies in her fury:P and nik is severly injured. (he's only not dead 'cause i love him, even if he is mentally unstable :sigh, got to love wolfs: )
AuraVybrid chapter 8 . 8/16/2010
ah, please continue the chapters, great chapter
laughing moon chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
nik's father should hit her or kidnap her or something and then nik should find out and go bezerk or something! and maybe seamus will help the father because he seems evil like that! it would be epic! thanks for writting and uploading a wonderful story!
midnight84118 chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
great job on this story hope to see more soon kep it up
Grape chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
I loved it. I think that Nik and Seamus are gonna kick each other's ass and Nik is gonna win..or he better win. I do think that Mr. Daddy is going to kidnap her, but of course I think that Nik will learn from his mistake after this. After all the mate connection is not something to mess with.
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