Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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MarielleMonster chapter 8 . 8/12/2010 Hey! I like this story! 1. Mr. Jansen is going to kidnap Albany ;) 2. Seamus and Nik are going to fight I like nik's temper D |
FM Radio chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 Does Daddy Jansen understand? Does he know that Nik raped her? Does he think she should just forgive that? I mean really. Trust is earned once lost. Please update soon! |
Midnight113 chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 I have no idea what he's going to do but I would kick his butt if he threatened me like that. ;) I love all the tension between them and the drama is great with Nik. I definitely enjoying this. Keep up the great work and update soon! |
violet-eyez chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 nik needs to get his ass handed to him and seamus too...he is just doing that to get nik mad |
Afan chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 I really love your stories (especially the one with Ashland, I love him!) but I can't say I like this one as much. It's so dynamic and interesting and I like Nik, but I really find myself really not liking Albany. She's a hypocrite. At first Shannon is better than a sis to her but because she doesn't understand wolves Albany begins to totally alienate her and ditch her for Nik w/o trying to help her friend understand her situation and that's kind of messed up. Then, after what happens, she goes to Shannon but Shannon is the one apologising for being a horrible friend even though she warned her that he was dangerous? Albany was the one who was afraid of him in the beginning and she knew he was controlling (the chase!) and Shannon was rightfully concerned, I think. Anyways the questions: 1) Albany might quit/get fired b/c of what happened and wind up working for Seamus? 2) Seamus will prop set it up so Albany is on his side and then Nik gets mad and tries to be Alpha? |
Ck90 chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 Of course it'ts all her fault, because she was supposed to just take all his shit with no compromise. Honestly want to punch both of them so hard that their wolf will aNt to leap out of their skin! |
Haybell chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 wow! Nik was an ass to her! He deserves the treatment he's getting, only if it was me, it would be worse! UPdate soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Annanymous chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 Omg :O, I was wondering also what big event was going to spring up here since everything seemed to be going so smoothly and what a big event it was! I dunno what Mr. Jansen will do...I'm feeling a kidnapping or something? Whatever it is I feel nervous for her! Nik and Seamus will probably deff have a big blow out eventually! I just hope that Nik really understands how wrong what he did was and really regrets and tries to make it up to her and doesn't just get off with a slap on the wrist! Albany needs to stand her ground and make sure he understands what he did! However I feel like this was such a huge thing that it'll probably take longer then just one chapter to resolve but I can't wait to see! |
autumnsprite chapter 8 . 8/10/2010 oh my gosh! go albany! He did wrong to her and she should stick to her guns and appropriately torture him for a good long while! I'm a bit scared about daddy though, what is he going to do? I think the tension between Nik and seamus is too great, it seems like seamus is cruising for a brusing! Can't wait for more! |
Crissy19 chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 This is what i love bout ur writting; wild and entertaing! I think nicks dad will make albanys life a living hell. He'll make her lose her job. Does the alpha want albany as a mate or do he just want 2 piss nick off? Poor albany! |
Anonymous chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 I think Mr. Jansen is going to bend Albany over his knee and give her a spanking both literally and figuratively. Also, I honestly believe Seamus wants Nik to attack him, for what ever reason, I am unaware. |
11cina24 chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 GEZ I freaking love your story. It is pretty amazing(: 1) I think his father and Albany will be shouting at each other when she gets there, she will say something to upset him and he will accidentally lash out and hit her which proves her point of how feral they are(: 2) Seamus is going to threaten Nik and stuff eventually when they are an inch from going into a full out brawl. And or Albany will step in as his mate. Update fastahh porfavor;D |
Crimsonlotus chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 i'd be freaked out if i were her |
elle chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 Seamus is nik long lost step-brother... LOL JK. Nik is a serious douche-bag. THERE IS NO EXCUSE FOR RAPING;PERIOD. His father is a douche too if he thinks it was alright for his son to rape her b/c he is an angry jealous bastard. Or to even expect her to forgive nik at all. That's absurd! Albany will probably have to be force to forgive that douche. She should runaway, far, far away. Her job is not worth it. BUT i most defiantly think her BF brother will come into play. yep, yep. |
chicagobabe chapter 8 . 8/9/2010 Oh fcuk she's screwed Lmao. I have to admit I love all the male characters in all your stories And I love of them all :) Cannot wait for the next installment :D |