Reviews for Big Apple I: Truth is |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mmmmm. They finally open up. :) ... Wait. This story is going to end soon? DX Noo! They should get together more! She shouldn't be satisfied with being an Omega! By the way, the ending was good since it showed their relationship starting to build up again, but it really stinks that this chapter never finished what Albany and Nik started at the end of the chapter... Besides that, good job. :) It seems so short to end it now though. o.o'' |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur finally are going to update georgias story so happy lol...i like this story but i also feel like it was kind of rush thewhole getting together thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, this has to be my favorite chapter of them all. It was perfect with Albany finally forgiving him and both of them finally taking that step forward. Plus, now both packs have united which is exciting as well. I'm happy for them. The ending was very sweet, I loved it. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woooo loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think he's acting like that to give Albany a taste of her own medicine. Love the story so far(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() plah! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thank goodness! Finally. That only took, oh I don't know, forever. Hopefully there wont be anymore "woe is me" attitude from Albany. That was just annoying. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm happy Albany finally found it in her to forgive him. It would've dragged on forever if she didn't. I'm glad to hear that this story is almost finished! I get excited when authors finish their work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is sad it is ending. I really like it. I am in your head O_O i don't know how to get out lol. I am going to be doing my story when winter break comes now that I have found out how hospitals work. I really how you will reread it than. :) I can't wait for more of your stories, they are my addiction. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well at least she got over it and they can move on. Please update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I have an obsession with your stories because I signed up just so I know when you update. Personally, I like Nik because he fucks up, but he knows he did and he at least makes a real effort to show Albany he cares and is sorry. I like that he isn't perfect and is honest about it. You asked if Ben should get a girl and personally I think that should wait till the next story. I like it just concentrating on Albany and Nik (lord knows it's messed up enough to keep everyone's attention) and I like Ben being an asshole. You can set him up with a human later - don't do Shannoh's messed up kid sister because that would just be way too obvious and she's going to need help. I think you it be awesome to set him up with a really strong human female (totally out of left field) who hates wolves as much as he hates humans and can kick some ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter, although I hope that they resolve their differences soon to some extent, the constant back and forth is becoming a bit drawn out. There was one thing that was bothering me grammatically that I wish you would fix. A few times throughout you used 'u' instead of 'you'. For some reason it was very annoying and although it's a little nitpicky of me I thought I would mention it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this whole story in just two days and it's absolutely amazing! I think Nik is trying to make Albany feel bad to admit her true feelings. She's suddenly noticing when he doesn't look at her or make her breakfast, but she's taken those simple gestures for granted and will soon begin to feel guilty. Yorkie is hilarious and reminds me of one of my friends. When will Shannon be back? Or will Nik refuse to let Albany see her friends now that things have suddenly changed? Please update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happen? their both so confusing and stubborn.. but why the sudden change in behavior for nik. i bet it had to do something with his brother..or maybe nik got tired of always going to albany so he's purposely ignoring her so she would come to him. whatever their reasons are..update 't wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love all these updates. It's like Christmas came early. I would say that his brother was killed in an accident that was nik may have thought he was able to save him and couldn't so he doesn't get attached to people to protect himself. Maybe hunters were the main reason for the death which would fuel his dislike of humans and the need to separate them form the pack. And Albany human likeness with his attachment to her is making this hit to clase to home and he doesn't want to get attached to have it taken away since she always tries to leave. How close am I? |