Hey hun I'm obviously this bored lol. I wish there was something I could do to make that pain from him go away, just like I wish I could stop caring about the shit at Milo's...I can still feel it eat at me sometimes...and it hurts...

Wow, you really know how to make a girl think.

I like how descriptive you are, even if it's an idea, yeah?

Cool.

I didn't really get the ending line; it could have ended with the God verse, but damn, this was fucking beautiful. Fantastic job.

This is really powerful, and feels like it has really raw emotion in it. I really like this, it's very good, very descriptive. It is sad but I think it makes it better. You have a really good style,

Keep up the good work :)