|Reviews for One Stop Shop|
| ARDW chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I LOVE this story...update please!
| golden62 chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
I love Minn, she is wacky and hilarious.
| golden62 chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
The whole chase scene and what happened after was funny. You had me laughing so hard I think I strained something.
The dialogue was so witty, great job.
| Sugabubble chapter 11 . 8/1/2011
The Japanese dialogue was a great idea. It certainly got my brain juiced flowing... U should have seen me looking back at the top of the page in order to figure out the speech :) Use it or lose it I would always say. Oh, the dialogue at the end of the chapter was so helpful, within a few years hopefully I won't need it and will even be able to write one or two reviews in Japanese. Nothing is impossible with God and hard work right? C ya.
| BettyBoo chapter 13 . 7/5/2011
yaaay, another update! first of all, thank you! and secondly, you go Minn! Show the boys what you can do! look forward to the next update, thank you!
| hotcheri chapter 13 . 7/4/2011
Oh, how I love this story. I'm so glad you updated! Is that a tingle of jealousy I detect in Dante regarding Mike? Maybe he's finally realising Minn's worth? And what's up with Mike anyway? Intrigue abounds! :)
| Divisionred chapter 12 . 4/26/2011
Thanks for a great update. I hope that Minn makes a great wedding cake. Especially since Mike and Nanette has faith in her abilities. Not like the rest of the people in her life.
| hotcheri chapter 12 . 4/4/2011
I read it all in one sitting! This story is seriously entertaining! Minn is hilarious-the funniest character I've read about in a while. I hope you continue soon,I'm excited to see what happens next :)
| BettyBoo chapter 12 . 3/14/2011
been missing this story like crazy - thank you so much for updating! i believe in Minn and know she'll bake the best wedding cake ever...right, lol? take care and thanks again!
| xxxSUNNIExxx chapter 11 . 2/20/2011
Ive really enjoyed what I've read about this story so far. Minn reminds me of myself at times and even though Dante spends most of his time brooding in regards to her many mishaps you can tell that he's starting to care for her. I really like these characters and I think I might have a slight crush on Mike. Lol ANXIOUSLY AWAITING AN UPDATE & HOPEFULLY AN ENDING TO THIS BUDDING INTERRACIAL ROMANCE!
| Streetwriter84 chapter 11 . 2/11/2011
*Nudge* Come on, give us an update...pretty please.
| BettyBoo chapter 11 . 1/7/2011
great update - thank you so much! Minn cracks me up every single time, lol!
| PadlockLOL chapter 11 . 11/24/2010
i hope you'll update soon and thank you for translateing that for us . well i liked how Minn told him 2 tell her wat she looks like he said brown hair nd brown eyes. that really tells you a lot that he doesn't care if she was black or not he wasn't looking on that at the start nd that shows a lot nd tells you alot bout a person. i fink he is having feelings for but doesn't knows it yet nd like how you put Mike point view in the story telling you how he felt bout her / wat his feelings are turning into. i hope you will contuine this and i would love reading more
plz update soon XD
| Divisionred chapter 11 . 11/16/2010
Thanks for a great update and translating the words between Dante and his customer. Surprise of all surprises that the fiance is someone from Minn's church. Yes, although Dante professed loudly that he doesn't like Minn, I am sure that he does. Thanks
| Divisionred chapter 10 . 11/16/2010
Poor Dante...I hope he finds away to make the recipe for the dessert soon. AS for Minn and Mike..oh, oh...I think Mike may have a crush on Minn. Which I am sure that Dante and Laine both will not like. Thanks for a great update.