|Reviews for Facing Ugly|
| Evangeline Elibeth Mariette chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Hello chickie! Love your story (of course) and I can't wait until you get off your butt and finish chapter one! You've been sitting on your (my) computer all day, and haven't done squat! But I love you anyway :)
Anyway, I love your character so far, and I can't wait to see how she develops!
P.S. thanks for favoriting my story (Teenager Lost at Sea) I'm glad you liked it!
See you later! (/:-})
| Slave2Karma chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Very interesting! You write in great detail, and this whole scene was very touching and heartfelt. One thing to think about: repeating detail. I only saw it in the first paragraph; it's one of those things I constantly comb through in my own stories. You mention several times in sentences that touch how cold it is/there’s no stars out, and that’s always something to look out for—it can get very repetitive very quickly. You move away from it right away though, and the rest of the story reads lovely. I’ll be back to see how this develops!
If you have any time, please check out my story Night Child: Ace’s High!