Reviews for Pimp my Avatar
CuteDreams chapter 9 . 5/2/2012
OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

They're so original! I've played those games...I refer to them as RPG games though D I think you should try out a site called TinierMe

Ok for my review

I loved it, it was great. There were a few flaws and holes here and there, but they were barely noticeable. :U that and I'd love to write a part of the story except I don't understand what you mean by sending chapters...like through email? O.o
sugar-filled-kisses chapter 9 . 1/31/2012
I VOW TO WRITE AND FINISH THIS...

I'm sowwee if I end up turning your story into crap D:

PWEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE D:
DecayedDreams chapter 9 . 11/17/2011
OMG! I don't care if this is a spoiler or not you updated!

Small mistake here: "without a hitch" - glitch

I would add a lot more detail in it but I'm sure you know. One question I have is why does it feel like there's another person overlooking the author here? It seems like the author was writing but there there was another person was overlooking the process.
Harlequin de Rustre chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
The male version of Lolita is shota... just so you know...

Also, this is weird, but still decently awesome.
MingYue chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
I know you've lost motivation to write this story, but if possible, I hope you would see it to the end. I think it's really interesting and original, not to mention it's like playing an otome game itself. Like you said, there aren't many games as such for females, so I was really excited when I came across this story of yours. It's sad that you're not going to update it anymore. :(

Well, I hope you'd atleast reconsider. ... Please?
lady homiced chapter 8 . 10/13/2010
I like it, I wish I could play games like webcar, but i odnt have home ineternt and it would seem wierd ot play it at school, if i could
Yereanth16 chapter 8 . 7/10/2010
That old lady is evil! Why was the rebel in her store? o.o when I saw virus I was like "oh crap" and found myself getting worry as well then found myself wanting to cry with her for the Megane. hmm was the Megane the muffle voice? haha she never knew what a pimple was, that was seriously funny.

-Yer-
thisaccounthasbeenlefttowither chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
yeah meganes r hard but j gotta luv em!
p.s, , main char kicks ass
DecayedDreams chapter 8 . 7/7/2010
I agree the story line is slowing down quite a bit. But don't worry I'm sure everyone here understands that you run out of ideas.
Yereanth16 chapter 7 . 7/6/2010
hahahaha this chapter ending was rather funny "play the game" haha and the granny forgot to give her the headphone haha.
KryssiHollie chapter 7 . 7/4/2010
Hmm..interesting..

Kryssi Hollie
Miss Bride chapter 7 . 7/1/2010
Hey, there... new reader. I actually decided to read because I got into this game called Tokimeki Memorial (ya know, digital boyfriend type games). XD Have you heard of it? Anyway, I like your story so far... though it was kind of extreme how she stabbed him with glass. O_O

Which kind of games do you play? I'm kind of addicted to these games right now. Haha...

And don't worry, kare or kareshi is the proper word for boyfriend. Along with boifurendo. I don't know what the other reviewer was talking about when she/he said "ketashi." O.O

Also, I never go after the Megane boy unless they're nice. T_T Their usual coldness pushes me away. Haha. But the glasses are cute. ;D

-お嫁さん missbride.
ai12love chapter 7 . 6/30/2010
wow, this is really good. i like it a lot. know any other places i could find a japanese centered game? i'm new to the site but i've been with for years.
DecayedDreams chapter 7 . 6/30/2010
So I looked up at that webkare game you were playing (at least i think your still playing), Are you playing it in Japanese? cause I dont' see a english version anywhere.

Yes I was bored and I was going to go play it...

now back to the story

Go Narue!

Great chapter and nice cliff hanger.

Keep up the great work
Yereanth16 chapter 6 . 6/24/2010
YAY someone else who shares my love for Naru Naru, FMA and Vocaloid, me loves Len have you heard Yandere? Its an awesome song by him did you watch Naru shippu?I am in the latest episode._.anyways sorry I got out of track, I LOVE your newest chapters I wish i could write as awesome as you r.r well good luck and keep up your awesomeness

-Yer-
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