Reviews for I Might Die Tomorrow
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I liked the last line, and I finally know what you meant by 'its alright / it's ok' now. The poem has a 180 turn and everything is suddenly rather bright :)
angrylove888 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
The last line really puts the *punch* into the poem and gives it meaning. The message is clear; live life to the fullest, live every day as if it were your last, etc. Even though this theme is not original in any way, you portray it very effectively and uniquely. Well done.
Heartafire chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Hi Socks,

I really enjoyed reading this. You have some wonderful images going on. I feel it could use a little tightening. Just a suggestion to be binned, but you might use "forward" rather than "onwards". I particularly like the last stanza, it is lovely. I am not fond of the repetition of "it will be alright, it will be okay' but that's just me. All in all , I think you have a terrific write here.

Heartafire
Daniel Mapp chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Its true. Death may come unto one, when they least know it.
Aureleis chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
*smiles and rereads*

That's an excellent composition; I myself have always liked the type of poems that have a repeating theme or idea. Wonderful job.