so they really are going to end up together

That was hilarious! lol. Love how he says that he camt just leave her covered in chocolate. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my goodness I just found this story and I LOVE it! Thank you for writing it. Please update soon. Bye

I lobe her reasoning! lol. I can't wait to see howbthat conversation goes! lol

Hello, let me start by saying that this story is pretty good, a little young, but good. I think your characters could be a little more developed, but that will come with time and practice. I do not mean to sound insulting at all, I write a bit, not so much anymore, but a lot of my stories sound/sounded like that as well. The only other thing I would say is that there are some discrepancies in your story that make it sound like you don't read your work. Like saying she will be going back to California when she is from Seattle, a little off. Other than that I say this is an around good story. Keep writing, you obviously have a talent and love for it.

Yay! At least he can still be sweet. I can't wait to see what happensnext!

Poor poor people! This is horrible. I hope everything turns put alright. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Sorry, didn't intend to be bitchy. I was just a little frustrated, because when I noticed that you had updated-I realized it had been so long that I had to re-read the entire story.

And just to make my point about others taking so long to update, I cameacross a story the other day was about 5 or 6 chaps long, but the writer had taken about 7 yrs. just to write that much! I didn't even consider reading it! My mind just kept screaming WTH! WTH! WTH! Is that person insane, they should have never even attempted writing if they weren't serious about it!

WHOA! Sorry for the rant! Really wanted just say thanks for the return statement. Always good to know that you haven't been blown off!

See, it's not just the writers that wish to be aknowleded!

HA, HA, HA

Read ya later! (soon)?

Does she want stone to start taking care of their son? Why is she there? I can't wait to see what happensnext!

Its very nice, the first chapter is refreshingly different.

I look forward to reading the rest

i've been ejoying your story, but do you think you could update a little faster? decent stories are so hard to find, so i'm hungry for more! don't hurry too much-that'll lead to too many mistakes, and that distracts from the story-no matter how well the plot and characters are developed. just don't stop. i'm sure if you looked at this site,you'd see all the stories that have been abandoned (for whatever reason) and get just as frustrated as i have been.

just don't leave me and others hangin'. ok?

Really love it! Incredible...but...okay, I'm just gonna say it cause it irks me a bit, she just doesn't seem to care much that he has a kid. When she was weighing reasons not to date him anymore, I kept waiting for that to come up but...no. I know hes not actually involved in the kids life but its still a big deal to have one! especially if one person in the relationship is 16, because one day that kid will wanna know who his father is and will probably get involved in his life, AND there is still a little one with his genes wobbling around somewhere. And I'd think it would give a 16 year old a bit more of a fright, because sixteen year old's are not thinking of kids, their thinking of college...ANYWAYS, I love your story and sorry about this but it was jut a little irk. :))

Please don't let them break up. That would be so sad. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Aw, love it!

Update soon!

That is so sad about his child. What is up with her grandparents and stone? I can't wait to see where you take this story next next!