Reviews for Unwritten
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
i liked the rhythm a lot, it had it's own beat

Best stanza:

I m lost, I m afraid,

All my dreams of you hasn t (haven't is the correct word since all is a plural collective noun, but I guess that ruins the rhyme, so didn't is the closest)fade.

Not once, not again,

I m never going through this pain.

Oh, and I've written a poem in stanza like you said (I even mentioned your penname in the A/N note :D )