|Reviews for Passing Point|
| MentalBrink chapter 2 . 4/10/2011
"...only vacuum will fill if you surpress"
I love this, it really adds to the feeling you have developed. A great last line I believe. I picture the girl being so fragile that the lightest pressure will have her cave in on herself.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
when i'm hurt in love, my heart does feel empty and hurt