Of course continue Shop of Wishes! You can't leave it here! I love this story!

This is probably the story with the most creative plot I've read here. I love Celeste, Chad, Ichi and Love. Even Bellamy had his moments. I hope you start updating this again. This is a masterpiece.

I love this:) Amazingly written,

This story seems alarming similar to a manga that I read so I was wondering, did you got this idea from the story petshop of horrors? In the beginning the story seems basically the same, the owner sets up a contract for people who need a miracle and there are consequences to breaking the rules of the contract. The only difference seems to be the fact that the owner gets to leave after granting a wish and that instead of pets the owner gives away wishes.

Very good so far, keep it up )

Ha, ha! Success! I have created the fortieth review! *fist pump*

an excelent story) i love celeste and bell and love and well to be honest i find ichi a dim #$% for what he did to celeste. i am so looking foward to your graduation now so i can see what chad will do...suspense much lolz

Aw! Wah. Hey, if you ever find yourself bored... you could write, ya know?

Well, good luck in school.

-DtS

Excellent! Much less awkward! I feel so special! :D You took my advice! Huzzah!

That was a great chapter. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar mistakes and the chapter was really interesting. We get to see Chad start to take his duties as soon to be owner of the shop, and Celeste trying to teach him. And also Chad was asking about Celeste's life, which is interesting as well. Though I wonder what will happen with Love and Bellamy once Chad takes over, because he won't be around then. I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the great writing.

This is one of the most original story that I have ever read. xD It a very interesting world you've created but what I don't get is how all of the characters seem to be joined together. Isn't the shop supposed to be in the Dream world where everyone could enter? It just seems like a really big coincidence for Ichi to know Chad and for Celeste to know Ichi's dad.

It's quite a good start so far; I'm quite interested in what happens next. :)

There are some grammar problems (starting new paragraphs when a new person is speaking, for instance), but they have mostly already been addressed.

I do have a bit of critique to offer, though:

"1) To grant a wish, the wish maker, you, must make a contract with the wish granter, me. 2) The contract must never be broken. 3) If the contract is broken the consequences are dire."

In writing, you have to spell out numbers less than ten; you can't write them as numerals. If the number is greater than ten, then you have a choice.

So the sentence really should be,

"One: to grant a wish, the wishmaker, you. must make a contract with the wish granter, me. Two: [and so on]."

This chapter was a bit short, but I can see that the others aren't. Good job so far! :)

i think chapter 8 should be from Love's POV...she's so innocent:)

Aw... no chapter! But, i will help! (Or try to...)

You could write the first paragraph, or most important paragrpah in all views, then choose which sounds best and fits.

Or, however the chapter is based on, or would find the events most interesting.

Hope that helped!

-Dawn that Shines :D

Hm, I think it being in Love's POV would be interesting, seeing as we haven't really done it from hers before. And, since she's younger, she'd have a different perspective, wouldn't she? So, I vote for Love's POV. _ Hope I helped!

~Layla

lol i love the last part :) go bella! hehe

anyway great job! i really like how you change perspectives, its makes it so that all of the story is being told from all the different sides :) and im curious to see whats going to happen next!

keep it up!

Well, that was a great, but slightly sad chapter, in a well written way. It's sad the Celeste is dying and now Chad will have to take over for her, and how Ichi feels bad for lying about his messed up past. The ending was funny though with Bellamy. And it was definitely interesting getting a perspective of the different characters. I look forward to reading the next chapter, keep up the great writing.