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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Second time around that I'm reading it but I actually like it more than the first time. Why? Because I live in India now and everything... the subtleties the names and the culture just jump out from the text and make it so much more real. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's sad, but I like that she had the strength to free herself at the end. The fact that she freed Jalpari as well made it even better. Beautiful story! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAH that's my name :D i am SHIVANI here me ROAR except i'm like naina; compared to my sister. because my skin is darker than my sister and i have a verry sharp tongue. heheh. though it gets me in trouble sometimes. . lol (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this one-shot, and I totally understand the burden of being the one with plain features. Its really nice and u did a great job at it. Ur awesome. Imika |
![]() ![]() Hey... Really like this... It realistic...so not too bollywood...and it's quite serious, dealing with the whole fair/darker skin coloured issue... Don't no if u meant it to be like that but either way it's really good...I could easily see this being made into a full story... Well done nd keep writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was really nice although i wish it was a bit longer and you were more descriptive, but it was a good plot and i could easily relate to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you handle the drama and the exotic scenario; it seems fresh, original and clever, I would like to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story is like a Bollywood movie I like it but I have a question whens the story take place like in modern times or older times |