Reviews for I decide!
Lissya chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Hmm. Second time around that I'm reading it but I actually like it more than the first time. Why? Because I live in India now and everything... the subtleties the names and the culture just jump out from the text and make it so much more real. Great job!
WishBlade chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
That's sad, but I like that she had the strength to free herself at the end. The fact that she freed Jalpari as well made it even better. Beautiful story! ]
Kiki Gardens chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This is really well written!
disappearing in the shadow chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
HAH that's my name :D

i am SHIVANI here me ROAR

except i'm like naina; compared to my sister. because my skin is darker than my sister and i have a verry sharp tongue. heheh. though it gets me in trouble sometimes. . lol (:
Usuicross chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I loved this one-shot, and I totally understand the burden of being the one with plain features. Its really nice and u did a great job at it.

Ur awesome.

tea.bags chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Hey... Really like this... It not too bollywood...and it's quite serious, dealing with the whole fair/darker skin coloured issue... Don't no if u meant it to be like that but either way it's really good...I could easily see this being made into a full story... Well done nd keep writing :)
psycho angel chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
it was really nice although i wish it was a bit longer and you were more descriptive, but it was a good plot and i could easily relate to it.
Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I like how you handle the drama and the exotic scenario; it seems fresh, original and clever, I would like to see more
veyo chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Wow this story is like a Bollywood movie I like it but I have a question whens the story take place like in modern times or older times