|Reviews for Uneven Evening Unnerved|
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Normally, I would tell you to omit the second "again" in the opening, but I think it actually works here [and adds a bit of anxiety to the tone, which I like].
"And you said that I must be going crazy." Ah, there's the madness I was sensing. I like the 'car dream' here; it suits the speaker well.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Wow! Brilliant evocative and real imagery that creates such tangible wonder and utilises language techniques beautifully and craftfully. Wow!
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Interesting and sort of depressing.
I love the way you began and ended the poem with the 'there it goes again' thing :) Pretty rockin'.
Great job, keep up the writing.
| Heartafire chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Like this, Faithless, love the surrealness and the way it rushes on. I believe there is a typo in the first line. I don't know about you, but my edit "button" is not working.
This is good. Heartafire