Reviews for Saint Lucifer's Bride
MeadowHasCome chapter 1 . 3/18
This is a pretty good poem. I liked it. Just some rough spots here and there, but waaay better than what I could've written! Nice!
Daniel Affaro chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I like the words used, and the rhyming scheme is clever, but the structure was kind of odd. It lacked a flow to carry the rhyme. When reading it I kept trying to get into a rhythm but the structure kept throwing me off my pace. I like the ideas and the wording though so overall the good balances the bad.
Darius Pendragon chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Good poem really. But it could use some work. You should try using full words in the lines and try putting commas in the middle of a line to give it a better flow. But all in all this is a good poem.

Darius Pendragon
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Wicked! I really enjoyed reading your poem. I want to add it to my C2! I wish you the best!