I shall have you know that I am terribly mad at you! I'm not one to boss you around but if I were to boss you around I would tell you that you are not allowed to say things like: "so it isn't all that good" about your writing. Never. EVER. I LOVED this poem, it was simple yet perfectly written, I have no suggestions for it at all, which if you knew me you'd know I always have something to pick at ;] I really did love this. Excellent, excellent work. However I am still mad at you and you shall not be forgiven! But I'll stop rambling now ] Beautiful poem.

Ta

~ Kat