Reviews for maybe
Helen Cole chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
This one went over my head. I'm sure there's a deeper meaning but I was kind of left confused. Sometimes good poetry is that way though. You have to delve into it to understand it.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I think the biggest illusion in this is age, although you have your Harold playing with a purple crayola I think he is actually much older than anticipated, or at least older in spirit.

I liked the verse regarding lennon and the war, I can relate it it s lot, how you can be both young and understand the ways of the world and vice versa. Nicely done.