I was so excited when I looked in my inbox and saw an updated story from Jamille Shane! That made my day!

Yay! More wedding plans. Every time I read about Shona and Garreth I love them more and more. Good job with the detail and I have to agree with Gareth about strangling the old man-meddler!

Keep up the good work and update soon :) I have truly enjoyed reading your story thus far!

This story is simply incredible! I officially hooked! I absolutely adore Shona. Your character development is outstanding, and the way you weave the plot, dialogue, and character interactions together is awesome as well. Keep us the good work and update soon!

Aw! I absolutely fell in LOVE with this story! I started to read another one like this, where they got locked someplace together (i think it was a library) but it was written so horribly I immediately backed out. Anyways, yours definitely redeemed my idea about this type of story(: And, it's got lots of twists! I love how they're dealing with Cheapskate Mac and Marty and WHOEVER left that stuff for Shona. If it's not Marty, I would think it'd be Candy, the jealous psycho. -_- Anywhoo, your doing a FABULOUS job! Your writing flows easily, and all-in-all has an easy-going, relaxed tone to it, which I enjoy. (Well, it's not easy-going and relaxed at the NON-easy-going and relaxed parts. xD ) And I think it's hilarious how they can just barely stay out of each others pants(: And I like how moral they are, her not wanting to have sex before marriage and him being absolutely so sweet and understanding and non-forcing to her. And the lack of cussing. That's always nice and refreshing, what with all the dirty words being flung everywhere now-a-days. I really appreciate that(: So, with all that said, I've had the epiphany that what you've created here is truly great! :) Excellent job, and good luck!(:

-elise

most awesome story!

i've been reading this story for a couple of days and can't wait to find out what happens next!

~ really hope no one dies~

- except for mac, he's a jerk...

but awesome story!

can't wait to know what happens in the end!

this is really good keep it going but if it goes any further on the touchy scale with them you will have to change it M just saying it would be good any way it goes :)

Reall great story so far. It's genuinely sweet, simple, and has the element of sexual frustration without being too vulgar. I haven't enjoyed a story like this in a while. The character development could you use some work, but this is only constructive criticism, take it any way you want to :). Seriously, this is a great, original story. Keep it up!

I really like this story so far, and I'm kind of happy that I stumbled upon it. I like the character development and the whole idea of being locked in a store. Can't wait to read more.

So she's part Native American and the other Black?

Oh lord, this chapter title. That guy from The Jersey Shore is probably eating this up about how he came up with 'The Situation'...bad guy.