Reviews for School of Horror |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yarik? wonder who and what he is...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() o i liike this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far :) I haven't seen anything like this on fictionpress and I'm really curious to see whats going to happen next ! Jubilee is really odd lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! LOL I don't even think I blinked while reading this chapter ;) anways I like the story it's great so far and I can't wait 4 the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe... every time I hear that lady's name, i think of Vegina... a good name for her, since she's all into the porny book and stuff... i wonder who the wolf man is. I hope she goes back and helps him. even just to shove it to the man or whatever that phrase was... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was expecting someone to find Jubilee just as she was swinging to hit the door handle, you know a sorta caught red handed thing. She's got quite the back bone, I can only imagine what other troubles she will find her self in. I like Anne Rice novels and that is one I haven't read yet, I think I will pick it up next time I go to the book store. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it looks like another interesting story is about to start! :) The first scene really caught my attention :) If it's something similar to "Deal with the Devil" ( Sadistic and twisted stuff) then I will definitely look forward to reading the upcoming chapters! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, this is a VERY interesting start. But I like it though! And could you please translate that prayer for us? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like where this story is heading, and I much prefer that you aren't writing it as how a real American school is. It's better that you change things. I thought the whole public schools being taken away and switched to private schools thing was a nice touch. A preview of torture to come...poor Jubilee, I wonder what she did to be put in that position. Can't wait to see what else you've got cooked up for this story :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() How creepy. Sorry to say that nothing resembles our schools but the word principle. But it doesn't matter. It's still good. Kinda like an alternate place. And even though english isn't you first language, you seem to write it better than most enlish people... Continue the writing please! |