Reviews for you can't stay here all night
MusicKillsThePain chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
i really liked this XD
for shame chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
for some reason "you can't stay here all night" hit me like. a fat guy. i dunno.

i like this.

it's gentle.

most of your pieces are brutal.

this is nice.
i think that maybe chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
"and you can't stay here all night"

this is probably the best line i've read on fp today.

seven words that surely have a thousand times that in explanation.

the succinct is something to be revered when done as well as this
RedGlowingFlowerPot chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I really like the last part on this one!