Reviews for Lucid Silence
KMx0x chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
Oh snap. I knew they had to be related somehow. (:

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon!

VioletStars chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
I like it! I like how you pointed out different smells in species, glad I'm not the only one :)

Keep writing!
Xandrea chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
This chapter was very interesting. I was so excited to see that you had posted it. I read it like literally minutes after I woke up this morning. Haha. I couldn't wait. It was very good. I just wish there was more of it. Keep writing. The story is going great. Can't wait for the next chapter. Even if it is a filler. :)
Xandrea chapter 6 . 10/8/2010
I really liked this chapter. I'm not sure about her bf though. This is really starting to get good. Keep it up. :)
midnight84118 chapter 6 . 10/7/2010
great story hope to see more soon
Knowledge is Power chapter 6 . 10/5/2010
2muchreading chapter 6 . 10/5/2010
She's making sounds. Is there a connection between Mr. Barnett and Christophe? He seemed interested in what she would do if she ever saw him again. I like this story and can't wait for an update to see how it plays out.
Xandrea chapter 5 . 9/1/2010
I really liked this chapter. I did not like his girlfriend. I'm secretly hoping she doesn't come up in any other chapters. Can't wait for the next one, dear. : )
FM Radio chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Yay! Sequal. I like this a lot. It's interesting and has a totally different tone from the first one. I like it a lot, and can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
KMx0x chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Oh goshh, they're gonna get intimate. (;

But yay, she's getting sounds out!

Update soon!

Knowledge is Power chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
um ihave no clue where this is going but that is a good thing
Xandrea chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
I really liked this chapter. Is Mr. Barnett Christophe? Or someone who knows him? I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Xandrea chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
I liked this chapeter. I think im starting to like mr barnett. he seems nice. Cant wait for more. keep writing. :)
KMx0x chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
Mr. Barnette made me sad with his little dazed moment. Bahaha.

I liked the chapter. (:

Just wondering, when you do scene changes, like the change from Mr. Barnette's office to the ride home with her mom, could you space that bigger or place a divider in?

'Cause intelligent me always gets confused to notice it changed. Lol.

Update soon!

Knowledge is Power chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
the family is jacks family isnt it
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