Reviews for Your Soft B
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This is lovely. Such descriptions!

I like the repetition of "Too far bloomed to be victimized"

The language in this is beautiful.

Isca chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
The alliteration in this poem is quite lovely: fawn-pranced pupils, barbarizing [...] bulbous, etc. I also loved the subtle Latinate phrasing of "en nox" and "discipulus."

"Too far bloomed to be victimized." Fascinating. It sounds as though the speaker feels too old to have her innocence stripped from her.