|Reviews for fall from grace|
| Lady Riss chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Hahaha! Your note made me laugh.
It was incest... which I still find a little disturbing. But their life sucks and it happens... I guess. Your writing is amazing and your word choice is superb. I won't stop reading just because I don't favor your pairings, silly!
Overall, I'm pretty sure I liked it. :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
The tense was a bit wobbly, sometimes I wasn't sure if it was the brother or the sister, or even a third party narrating, but I've come to the conclusion that it was the brother.
I loved everything about this, it was focused on incest but it didn't feel or seem dirty. I loved the sister, ballarina, quoting poetry, that mystical vibethat young girls have, I was so there...another wonderful creation, keep up the good work.