Please continue

You should update. Soon...

Awwww it's so cute! I see you haven't updated in a while but please do because I'm loving the story so far :)

I wish you would update its such a great story.

I've enjoyed reading your story. I just hope that you're okay. I only say this because it's been almost a year since you've updated this story, and you stated at the end of the last chap that you had already started the next chap.

I'm not trying to be pushy; I know that 'life' happens. I'm just eager for an update. Hope we hear from you soon.

Please finish the story! Great storyline, details, characters and flow.

I wanted to add my vote to other reviewers that you update this story and not drop it. It is based on that classic rich guy/girl from wrong side of tracks cliche, but it is totally unique in story line. It is hard to find good writing on this site, so I hope you will continue with this. So many stories are just shallow drivel, and it's nice to see something with some depth, where the characters are actually struggling and growing. Please keep it up.

Trey is such a teenage boy. Haha, I don't think I like the part where he wants to sleep with her, mostly because how could he even think of that when she's sick, he KNOWS she's homeless and fragile, and she's practically raising two kids? If I were a guy, I'd be more concerned with trying to help her and see if she's comfortable... not trying to get in her pants, you know? Yeah, yeah, temptation? Bullshit. Lmao, but either way, their chemistry is undeniable. Hopefully it's all sorted out, because Trey's issue with his friends is also pissing me off. She's going to get hurt, and he's going to be too much of a coward to stand up. At least, that's what I see so far with his character. He doesn't know much about her, and so far his friends are on a higher level than she is to him. Gah. Update soon, we need to know the truth. HAHAH.

XOXLUURVE

Just found this story the other day, and I absolutley love it! And I don't review very often, so you have to take this as a very good sign! Seriously, I thought when I first started reading it that I wouldn't actually like it, but I really do! Keep up the good work ) )

I love it so far!

This story is pretty good! Even though it is a classic cliche it's still a bit refreshing to see that she really is poor but strong and a hard worker.

I hope you update soon, even though I read on this last chapter that you had already started the next one I see that you haven't updatedin a couple months!

Please don't drop this story, i would really love to see how it ends and what will happen next.

Thanks for publishing this!

Daww, sucha cute chapter. I loved it! Keep up the great work.

I wonder what's gonna be talked about in the next chapter, its kinda suspenseful XD

So update soon, please!

I didn't see any grammer or spelling mistakes, so good job at that! That's my biggest pet peeve DX .

I'm still not quite sure what Ashlee's big plan is and why she wants revenge on Alex. Is it something to do with telling everyone at school that Trey was dating a poor girl or something? That's kinda what I'm thinking...

Update again soon pretty please with cherries on top! I adore this story XD

-CrimzonRoze

They're so cute together. ) Too bad her situation is so complicated. Damn that legal system. lol.

i just started reading this story this afternoon and i love it hope you update soon cause i want to know what gonna happen next. but great job i truely like it

Aw. Their relationship is progessing. I love it. Thanks for the update. Sorry I couldn't have review earlier. Had things to do. lol. Anyways, I really want to know Ashlee's evil plan and what happen next with Alex and Troy. So do update. thanks you