Hey,

Great story. Nothing at all like I was expecting.

I picked up on the werewolf and vampire hints, but I have to admit I didn't see Carter as a supernatural being.

You have done really really well in developing your characters. Especially Kasey. She is a really established character, with her firery outbursts and neglecting mother.

I can't wait to see more of Dorian. You have left him as a quite and enigma in Kasey's eyes, yet the changes in perspective work really well in revealling more about the plot. I'm wondering whether you will touch on Kasey's past trauma with Dorian. It's a very interesting concept to mix with such characters.

Anyway, I love the story. There are no mistakes that I can pick up on, not to mention I can't wait to find out what happens next,

Garneau.

Sexy Dress (: Sometimes it nice to feel good! It let on a bit more about Dorian! I hope you have a Dorian & Kasey interaction soon! And maybe he will let her on, on all the things going on

(: Update Soon!

Btw Whats your update sched?

Hi Wings(:

I wanted to know your updating schedule :P And I wanted to tell you that Dorian sounds like a hunk xD I was wondering what exactly he is as well as Carter and Jace. Are they demons? or at least Dorian? Jace a Wolf? and Carter a Special Human?

Thats my guess :) Update soon!

This is soo cute.

I love how carter is being introduced in this chapter.

Can you make longer chapters so we can enjoy reading more in one chapter.

Good job and keep continuing

By the way thanks for the advice. i will read The caller

coitinue and fast

Carter seems cute with all is fiery red hair and cheekiness :) Glad you introduced a character like him into the story, he'll help the pace to gather speed i think :) Your doing a brilliant job! Really amazing writer! Keep up the good work! XX

you, my friend, are a lovely writer. keep up the good work, I'm in love with this story.

Aha :) Brilliant chapter, really want to know why Jace doesn't like her, to her it seems like everyone hates her; thats horrible :( I love how though Dorian cant control his desires for her blood :) X

Ohh all the little flashbacks about Kasey arereally heartb-breaking :'( I hope that she can recover and that Dorian helps her to do so! Another great chapter! X

Wow, just wow.

Love it, love it, love it.

So is Dorian like a vampire or a werewolf? :P

Or neither? And something all together different :) AND HE VANTS HER BLOD! hehe

Ohh he's found out about poor Kase's ordeal. Thats awful what happened to her!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Oh again; this is all getting rather interesting! Her parents seem like really dodgy characters! I love the banter between Kase/Dorian; really interesting and cute :P Great work again!

Oh; new story :) I've been thinking lately hmm I havent got any good new fiction press stories as of late as my favourites atm our like nearing to complete and when I was searching this morning, the summary to this story totally caught my eye and I was correct, after reading this chapter, I cant wait to read more! You've got lots of intense wording and such, especially with regard to what happened to Kase and boy oh boy does this Russian guy sound hot! *winks* I think I might be obsessed with Russian accents as I have been for quite a while! :P But anyhow - calming down now - great great great introductory chapter, I'm loking forward to seeing how their relationship develops! I really cannot wait to read more! So keep up the good work! I'll add it to favourites and story alert, so I don't miss any updates and tings :) Well done!

Hey,

this is really getting interesting. i would love to know why Jace hates her soo much- and i am guessing that he is a werewolf.

keep up the good job

CONTINUE AND FAST PLEASE

:O Make the next chapter in Dorians POV and update soon!

Hey,

Your spelling by the way is top notch. Your probably the first story out of many i have read that dosen't do good in spelling.

I love the way the story is turning out and i hope you continue and fast.

Hey,

This is absoutly a very good story.

I love the unexoected twist. Of him being a vampire.

I hope you continue and fast.

i cant wait to read more