|Reviews for the green lady|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
This is a *beautiful* haiku, it barely looks like one because you've packed so much into those syllables, every word works hard for you. Especially loved the 2nd line.
This reminds me of Lady Greensleeves.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
good word choice in "absinthe" and what can I say I like the author's note. There is a fantasy quality to the poem.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
That is beautiful. A gorgeous metaphor, and it has so many layers. Lovely. Keep writing! :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Loved this... for a haiku you give so much information in so few words. I loved the "hothouse rose" imagery it made me think that the subject of the piece was natural, yet dangerous, constantly clean. Keep up the good work.