Reviews for the green lady
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
This is a *beautiful* haiku, it barely looks like one because you've packed so much into those syllables, every word works hard for you. Especially loved the 2nd line.

This reminds me of Lady Greensleeves.
nickyO chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
good word choice in "absinthe" and what can I say I like the author's note. There is a fantasy quality to the poem.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
That is beautiful. A gorgeous metaphor, and it has so many layers. Lovely. Keep writing! :)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Loved this... for a haiku you give so much information in so few words. I loved the "hothouse rose" imagery it made me think that the subject of the piece was natural, yet dangerous, constantly clean. Keep up the good work.

Much love,