I fall for u was not mean to fall on floor lol I love this one shot

THIS STORY WAS SO STINKIN' CUTE X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 I LOVE IT XD
If you ever feel like writing a sequel, I'm all for it ;) :)
And yes, I loved the parody of Dory's song, because I parody that ALL THE TIME XD

I love how this is so light hearted and just full of love. I'm so glad it wasn't that "I've loved you since eighth grade too" kind of ending. It was good. :)

Awww... This is really fluffy

Great story :D I love it :)

YAY! LOVED THIS! The ending was too good! Great work!

Cute! :)

Hehe! Cute and funny. Awesome story!

ha ha dis is UBER UBER cute :)

This was an amazingly cute story that had me smiling all the way through it.

Hey! I have some exciting news to share with you. This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! :)

Here's the Review:

"Raise your hand if you can state that your best friend has meddled in your life, especially your love life... Well no one can say they have fallen victim to their best friend's meddling as badly as the main character in IncapableDreams 'Because I Fall For You', and if you have then you have the world's best friend

Kimmy's best friend, Roy, has sent her crush of two years a letter stating that she wants to be held close by him while they kiss senselessly. It could be rectified, a simple joke but no... Roy just had to sign it from her. This can't be a good thing, can it?

The fact that this is a relate-able one shot, “Because I Fell For You” has you hooked from the very first scene as IncapableDreams writes the interactions between the two best friends perfectly. The characterisation is spot on. Kimmy is in a scarily calm mood as she replays what Roy did; almost as if trying to believe that it has really happened; while Roy believes that he has been the ultimate best friend by doing such a task. Their interaction has the reader chuckling, and most likely empathising with Kimmy, thanks to the light elements of humour that IncapableDreams has added to the dialogue.

“Because I Fell For You” is a short, addictive one shot that everyone should find a spare five minutes for... Trust me, you won't be let down!"

Keep writing,

Helen xo

Goody goodness this is such a cute, cute story...! :D

YESYESYESYESYES. This. Was. So. Amazing. Wow. How fluffy. :). I liked your characterization. The male lead was yummy (to say the least) and your heroine was so adorkably awkward. Kind of cliche (the guy actually makes a move on her as opposed to finding her revolting) but I only notice that as an afterthought. In other words, this was a well-written cliche-in-disguise. And I loved every bit of it. :)

Adorable ending and fantastic one-shot :)

I love your writing, it seriously makes me laugh! Oh, and I love Dory too. So much so I named my cat after her (she has a bit of a long term memory issue as well...)