AH, it was JUST lovely and the ending was brilliant.

Thanks loads for writing it.

AW that was adorable!

And I totally hate running with a passion.

Hahah(:

I liike :D

YUS! That was really cute! Love the part when she was talking about exercise, I can definitely relate.

loved it! especially last line :)

Ri

So cute.!.

I love that you made him fall, good on you.!. Serves the bastard right.!. LOL

Aw...this was soo cute

so gosh darn cute! twas stock full of awesomeness D

Haha - Hehe!

Got to be one of the most amusing stories eva!

hehe really cute story :P

aww lol thats so sweetD

haha i love it when the old lady came she was like WTH?

tehe her best friends are so awesome, loved the ending when she was like 'yeah you will fall for me' then he tripped XD

great one shot though. one of my favourites D

please please please consider making this a full story. I just think its a cute story and would love to learn more about the characters :]

hahahah he fell. lolz its karma (kinda) ahaha

Haha, this was funny and sweet at the same time. My favorite part was when she pushed her friends in front of her and ran because it reminded me so much of my friend. HAHA! And the ending was great. An awesome job! I don't think there's anything you should change.

Just keep swimming. hehe.

Hearts Sarah.

haha that woz awesome, the ending cracked me up;)