Haha, this was funny and sweet at the same time. My favorite part was when she pushed her friends in front of her and ran because it reminded me so much of my friend. HAHA! And the ending was great. An awesome job! I don't think there's anything you should change.

Just keep swimming. hehe.

Hearts Sarah.

haha that woz awesome, the ending cracked me up;)

I think I am now suffering from lack of oxygen and back pains from rolling around the floor laughing. :") Oh the hilarious irony of the last sentence. This. Is. GENIUS. XD

omg. that was just so cute!

I lalalalalalalove it! That is so fricken adorable! Great Job!

Aw :) Thats so cute

Wow the end was so cute

and so he fell lol

WEIRDEST THING HAPPENED.

I was talking to myself out loud, and I said, "Ok, I'm gonna go on FP really quickly and read a one-shot..."

Then I was freaking out about it before I went to FP because I didn't think I would be able to find one, and yours was the first story on the list.

So thank you.

Anyway, that was so adorable and funny!

Travis is awesome.

LOVED IT.

Perfect mix of humor and romance