holy crap! that was an awesome continuation! just some editing issues, but it's a nice progression of the storyline, very quick and it pulls you right in. i'm interested in seeing how this is interceded, if at all. good stuff!

nice start. love to see where this goes.

i always enjoy a good bw/wm story (wish there were more out there). I like this so far. Who is Angel engaged to? A werewolf? Why are the werewolves jealous? Please continue.

KNH

hi Paris how r u