Reviews for Blood Contract
laughstomuch chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Great start to the story looking forward to reading the rest
Readat3108 chapter 7 . 2/7/2011
Amazing! I love your story and can't wait for an update! All those rewrites were wqorth it I love the chapter.

Update soon!
jkp1092 chapter 7 . 2/3/2011
I really hope that you give us another chapter soon. I really love reading your story and have been anxiously awaiting your next update!
The Dark Empress chapter 7 . 1/28/2011
Ok I stumbled upon this story today and I must say I'm hooked. I really like your characters and I'm very curious to see what you do with this story. I also love Jena's sense of humor it is quite amusing to say the least. Keep up the good writing and update soon please!
Shadowfax31 chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
I love this story, but seriously, your late...


someone call 911, one of my fav authors went MIA and no ones heard from her for a month.

we are assuming the worst

if you have nay information it would be greatly appreciated if you would call 911 and tell. or PM me to tell me your alive and kicking.

Lots of Love,

KayleneH chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
Good chapter!
ibblycoot chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
Chryse chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
1. Interesting. I like all your characters so far, but, like Jena, I'm rather impatient to find out more. ;)

2. You probably should go over your whole story at some point and check for typos. A number of your sentences are slightly off.

3. Update soon, please!
pren chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
amazing work so far! i'm highly anticipating the next update _
StaNdUPtomE chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
I loved that last line, adorable

Can't wait for more

Update soon
StaNdUPtomE chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Just to say, creepy :D but great... still reading
Liggit chapter 7 . 1/16/2011
The beginning of this chapter almost made my eyes bug- my first thoughts were "Did something ALREADY happen?" / "Is she dreaming?" / "WTF is going on?". And such. Haha. Did I mention how much I LOVE your writing? You just had to make me fangirl at the beginning AND at the end, huh? ;D. Oh my gosh, and when Laz spoke in another language? I could just faint from the mental image. And so humorous how the couple can be peaceful one moment and fighting the next- poor Jena is still in the dark that's why, and Laz has a temper on him. And it was funny how Xavier, Dexter, and Charles had this moment of silence and tension at the table b/c they all know what's really going on, the something that Jena hasn't realized yet. And how does someone of their world know who their mate is? More specifically, how did Laz know his mate was Jena? Is that why Charles asked for his help? Did Charles find him and that's how Laz found her? And oh, how interesting is that that Xavier's been watching over Jena her whole life too? If she didn't have Laz...*wink*wink* Anyways, I'm SO psyched to find out what happens next! I'm hooked! XD
Liggit chapter 6 . 1/16/2011
Wow, I think I'm going to fangirl alot in this story, haha- how Laz pulled Jena into his lap, how their minds intimately connected, and the talk about mating- definitely fangirling! I just can't believe Jena can't put two and two together (Laz's mate her). I think most girls would assume that they would be the mate the guy was talking about, especially if he kept dropping hints like "You know her" and stuff like that, because it's what most girls would want (being the soulmate of gorgeous guys is the stuff of fantasies, I tell you! :D). Ah well, obliviousness can be still be considered cute I guess. And I loved the glimpse of Jena's childhood and past at the end of the chapter- it was TOO cute how she fought with Lazarus even though she was, what, five? haha! And it was cute how he fought back! HAHA! Foreshadowing of the future to come, lol. I also thought it was funny that Jena knew Dexter too and was going to choose him over Laz, so funny.
Liggit chapter 5 . 1/16/2011
When I read this chapter I was like "I knew it!", that Jena and Laz do share a past indeed. Gotta mention again that your writing is just EXCELLENT- awesome descriptions, awesome dialogue, awesome pacing. JUST AWESOME. XD You've got everything right, m'dear, when most authors do not. So a GIANT cookie for you :D.
Liggit chapter 4 . 1/16/2011
Love Jena and Lazarus' interactions, and I love the mystery behind Laz's behavior toward Jena- is it just attraction or something more? And half-naked Xavier? YIKES and DROOL XD. Still curious as to why Xavier touched the mark on Jena's shoulder (which was very well-described by the way, ah the vulnerability)- doesn't he know, like, EVERYTHING? lol. And Laz's reaction to it (which made me fangirl AGAIN), alluding to the fact that Xavier did know what he was doing. Which leaves me a tad confused, since he acted like he didn't? Oh, and it was funny how Laz threw Xavier across the kitchen. *snickers*
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