Reviews for Blood Contract |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Let me start off by saying how much i just feel in love with your story. Usually, i don't read incompletely works (i have no patience ), so my reading this was a total accident, but i think it's well worth staying on board for. keep it up and update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im really enjoying this story, and i can't wait to read more. Please update soon! Ja-Ne _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, PLEASE update soon! I'm begging you! This is SO GOOD! |
![]() ![]() omg! so fricken good best chapter yet! cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so first off: you seem to have a pretty awesome plot going on here. You have little symbols and a bit of foreshadowing (?) going on, and I like it! I also like-love- the way you create it a romance, but the lead man isn't always around. He's not obsessively around. I hate it when he's always the one you hope it is. Great job on keeping the readers on their feet! Second: I love the details and just the general writing prompt. It keeps me intrigued and very entertained. While there is a dark, mystical underlining, there is still a very humorous and lighthearted undertone as well. I very much enjoy reading this and I hope that you continue. I love reading stories like this; the ones that are original and amusing. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off, I'm extremely impressed lately the stories posted on this site have been alright to mediocre. Your story however ranks an excellent. You have a strong voice and writing style. Your characters are dynamic and well developed. And the mythology mixed in with your own ideas is fascinating and intrigueing. Your grammar mistakes are few and far between an amazing thing with no beta, when most writers here have one or more with more grammar mistakes in one chapter than you have in all. I will also add that this story is very captivating, I had difficulty stepping away from the computer even at 2:30 in the morning. Wonderful job! Good luck and I hope to read more chapters soon! Earyende |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao she's so blind xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I love this so far! I can't wait to read more! I want to know more about Lazarus' and Jena's relationship. Update soon, please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waah! I live in Vancouver! :) |
![]() ![]() I love Lazarus! I just discovered this story an am happy to see it is being updated. It is so original and the characters make me so curious. I look forward to your next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE! This story is FANTASTIC! I'm hanging for the next installment. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing Jena was having a slow moment when she thot that Sharai was Laz's mate... ARGH! I want the next one to be here already! DX Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! :) Such an amazing chapter! It shows us another side to Lazarus and has oineof her memories! :) Great job and please update soon! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad you, leaving us with a cliff hanger...update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray for the update! Great story, love the background information that is starting to come out. |