What an amazing story, I can't wait till you update again :).

Not trying to freak you out, but i've been waiting for this story to update for ages and im so excited its finally out! You're a really good writer, and i swear, i found this story in like, 2011. Or maybe even ten. But anyways, Yay! Thanks for Updating! Use this as motivation! i wanna finish this story!

You have no idea how glad I am you've posted this chapter! I almost didn't believe it when I found the alert notice in my inbox. Amazing chapter.

The scene of him holding onto her was chilling, and felt very real. Can't wait for whatever else you can offer!

I remember this. I like it. I'm happy your back.

Please make regular updates!

Still here its kinda funny I saw the update on the site right when I got the update email.

We all ha e things that we must deal with and I know I don't blame you for taking so long to update.

Until next time,

Much love,

Sarah

A.k.a. blondiej1

Really, really great story! So unique!

Hope you can update soon :)

Hi, I'm a new reader :) My god, do I love this story!

So you can guess how disappointed I was when I got to this chapter an learned you're going to edit through this :(

I'm incredibly sorry for your loss- even though I don't know you, my heart goes out to you and your family.

Agh- where do I begin? I love this! Your characters are all amazing- though I would like to see more Sharai(sp? Not that I like her...) and maybe a reappearance of jena's best friend? Will she see her again?

I'll keep this rant relatively short, I promise... I would love to see an update soon, though :)))) good luck with the editing process, and I promise to keep an eye out for an update! I want to see a continuation of ch 7! :P

Wishing you the best,

D

I love this story and can't wait for the revamped one! Will it still have the same title or will that change? Update soon! Happy writing :D

Hi! You're writing and story so far is great. It was pretty compelling and I didnt want to stop reading. I have the same questions as Jena do, and is very curious to the bond between her amd lazarus. So yes, I was slightly disheartened that my curiousity will not be satisfied for awhile since you're revamping the story. To be honest I didn't find anything wrong with the pacing and was slightky surprised you had trouble with it. Understandably, with the rate its going, it seemed like a pretty thick and long book. I would enjoy that, buf maybe that wasnt what you wanted.

Anyways, im sorry im missing some apostrophe and what not because im reviewing from mh phone. I hope this story will eventually get going. You're a really good writer, and ive been reading a lot on this site.

Xx

._.'' The delay of a lifetime.

Oh well. I don't see what needs to be improved (besides the small misspellings every here and there) and the story is already great so far. As you write/type more, stories tend to improve on their own... it's magic in its own way. x)

I do think Laz refers his mate (from chapter 6) to Jena and Jena has gotten the wrong idea. Hehe. Hopefully, they'll be together someday. That cliff hanger is the definition and epitome of 'AGRHH!' after being left for a year or so. Lol.

Also, I'm sorry for your loss. :/ I do understand how that feels...

Did Laz just say...?

o.o XD It seems the story gets interesting now. Lol.

To me, Laz and Jena are perfect for each other. xD Anyways, this story is coming to be quite good. The commentary (Jenna's thoughts) are excellent. They are a 'unique' way of writing, so to speak. There is enough comedy to keep a reader laughing, yet the plot is so secretive and starts to unfold so slowly. xD

If you can, please make more. I think my review for the 1st chapter didn't work... but, the story is awesome. How often do you update?

This is brilliant. I adore Laz and Jena cos they're just so cute together, but at the same time I feel so bad for Laz. I'm guessing Xavier used to like/love Rosemary? Please update soon! To be frank the earlier chapters seem pretty darn perfect to me and don't really need editing, but happy with edited version if the next chapter comes out soon! Please say it will come out soon - I'm dying to find out what happens next. Thanks so much for posting brilliant, awesome, super fantastic author!

This story is AMAZING! It has so many twists and turns and Laz and Jena - arrgh ao cute! Please please update soon!

Haha, I was looking forward to seeing what happened next, and practically died when I saw this was an authors note. Anyway its really good so far, so update as soon as you can.