I like it. It reminds me a lot of Mean Girls the movie. And I'm in high school, so I definitely get what you're talking about. I like the part, "All because of her heals, she's grasped the confidence." It seems as if the heels give her special powers.

I don't understand the line after that, though. To the very tip of a pointy needle?

word.

I liked everything except te first line. I would have liked it better if you described the sound rather than just writing "click flavor" it just didn't fit with the rest of the piece. Keep up the good work though.

Much love,

Juliet.