Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive
AZsweetheart chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
You updated! I'm so excited! Okay, so, I like that you're bringing Georgia's degree into the story, because I was thinking "Shouldn't she be able to handle this better?" I think it's gonna make a big difference in the way she interacts with Kenny.
September Stone chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
Good to hear that the writers block is over. I did not expect to see Ashland react that way but who knows, maybe its a good thing. I guess we will find out in the next chapter. Please update soon! :)
Fallcolours chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
GASP*** that felt so real, I thought I got hit by Ashland! O Poor Georgia (

Pheww finally a chapter after waiting for sooo long! Man I wanna know what happens next quickly so hope you update fast! ;)
TheRaven'sFeather chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
This story disjusts me. Ken is disjusting. How you could write about her being abused like that and still have them be together after is beyond me. It's horrible.
AbbeyXD chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
Update soon! :)
bookworm6193 chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
YAY! You updated! Wow, Ashland's acting like an ass. And Marilene? Georgia supported her through her hard times and now she's just backing away from Georgia? That's messed up. Great chapter!
elle chapter 16 . 3/12/2012
How can people dislike/hate Georgia for her actions towards Kenny? How is she the wrong one? The only thing she did that is horrible was sticking with Kenny, hoping that he will freaken change... Don't get me wrong, I think that people can change but c'mon. If he really was sorry and wanted to show her and everyone else that he was a changed man, he wouldn't have kidnap her from her own home-beat her boyfriend (did he? I forgot, it's been a long time). you know, something normal that is acceptable. Him kidnapping her, trying to make her accept the situation just proves that he's still an asshole. HE IS THE ONE THAT NEEDS TO ACCEPT THE SITUATION. Kenny, you fucked up; you fix it, not Georgia. Yes, I am saying that she should not forgive him until he is a better man. I agree with you (Kangae no Hinansho ), I don't know how you will redeem Kenneth character. But honestly, it's those little things that counts (and builds up). Thanks for updating.
Niky D chapter 16 . 2/15/2012
I really hope that you finish this I want to see how kenneth is going to solve the problem he dug a hole into. I feel that she should keep her gaurd up while also giving him a chance and stop going out with other guys she knows she loves kennie and she is only further hurting the both of them.
n2p chapter 16 . 1/31/2012
omg please post a new chapter soon!1
sneaky-fox chapter 16 . 1/29/2012
I've been "saving up" the new chapters so I could read them together... I love this story more and more! but i was actualy starting to vote for ken (until he killed andrew)

It might just be me but I think Georgia has been a bit unfair to him.. I know he's psycho wolf but it really seemed like he tried to be better (there is a huge BUT to this though! I thought he was already done with dannielle but if he kept seeing her until that morning when he announced they were over Georgia has not been mean enough yet!)

can't wait for the next chapter :)
Jess chapter 16 . 1/22/2012
I don't really understand why everyone hates Georgia. She has done some things I don't really agree with, however I totally understand where she is coming from. Ken is an ASS and not just an ass he's a verbally and physically abusive ass. So why the hell are people blameing Georgia for this? She should not have to walk on eggshells 24/7 so she won't upset him. Ken needs to make some MAJOR changes, not Georgia. (everytime he blames her for his issues I just want to punch him in the nuts sooo bad -_-)

Out of all your female characters, Georgia is by far my favorite. Even battered as she is, she's still not really taken his shit, and in her own small ways she's trying to stick up for herself.

I really like this story and I hope you update soon and sorry about the long review ).

P.S. Please have Georgia kick Ken in the nuts for me...PLEASE, I would feel so much better lol.
pittstick1 chapter 15 . 1/15/2012
Your fiancée and IlveJcb are not the only ones who dislike/hate Georgia. I am in the same place. I really can't stand her. She is extremely annoying. I know she is struggling with Ken but how she is acting is totally pissing me off. Often times I want to smack her. She is stubborn and thinks only her way, so I've been getting very frustrated with her. She has studied this stuff, doesn't she know what she is doing just makes it worse?
lovebookz chapter 16 . 12/20/2011
omg i cant believe they ate him!well either way great chapter i wonder what georgia wants to talk about and i wonder how she will react towars kenneth's actions...update soon either this story or in for the kill or just both :)
Midnight113 chapter 16 . 12/16/2011
Great chapter, I want to see a sweet Kennie... I know it can be done. Good luck with that. ;) Update soon!
PeterMoore chapter 16 . 12/10/2011
I can't believe kenneth ate andrew...
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